MY SPIRIT
For every lock there is a key
as daub combines with wattle.
My spirit’s always here with me
unless I’ve finished the bottle.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I posted this recently as a comment so apologies if you've already seen but I'm currently out of new offerings and thought it worthy og going in the gallery.
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I am sure if that bottle is finished there must be another gin which you can open.
Yes you are right - we have 6 bottles of the elixir - and my favourite by far is the sloe which I drink quickly.
A fine write and pic M. Oh lol. Some don't finish the bottle, cos I add water to it. How's the itching??
Okay this morning - just hope the temperature stays above freezing.
Try doing it backwards - add the spirit to the water.
I don't usually get the itch unless it's severe - some degrees below freezing. But little patches of itching can start up. We got fleas? (Speak for yourself Orchi!).
Michael,
No apologies necessary! Your writes are worth repeating! Your āspiritā write just reminded me to order a bottle of it for my hubby. No coal in his stocking this year!
Love the painting!
~Laura~
What spirit will you get?
Mines a ton and ginic.
The Glenlivet12
Heās a single malt scotch whisky man!
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I was not expecting the end, but it made me chuckle, no end.. cheers
Cheers Neville.
Always plenty of spirit to be found in the next bottle sir.
If you can find it when you're p****d. š¤¢
Coooeeeee M. That evening OK? Got any bottle for the evening?!
Sloe gin which I'm drinking quickly. Hic
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