MY SPIRIT

Michael Edwards

 

 

MY SPIRIT 

 

For every lock there is a key
 as daub combines with wattle.


My spirit’s always here with me
unless I’ve finished the bottle.

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 16th, 2018 00:51
  • Comment from author about the poem: I posted this recently as a comment so apologies if you've already seen but I'm currently out of new offerings and thought it worthy og going in the gallery.
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  • Users favorite of this poem: LaurašŸŒ»
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  • Goldfinch60

    I am sure if that bottle is finished there must be another gin which you can open.

    • Michael Edwards

      Yes you are right - we have 6 bottles of the elixir - and my favourite by far is the sloe which I drink quickly.

    • orchidee

      A fine write and pic M. Oh lol. Some don't finish the bottle, cos I add water to it. How's the itching??

      • Michael Edwards

        Okay this morning - just hope the temperature stays above freezing.
        Try doing it backwards - add the spirit to the water.

        • orchidee

          I don't usually get the itch unless it's severe - some degrees below freezing. But little patches of itching can start up. We got fleas? (Speak for yourself Orchi!).

        • LaurašŸŒ»

          Michael,

          No apologies necessary! Your writes are worth repeating! Your ā€œspiritā€ write just reminded me to order a bottle of it for my hubby. No coal in his stocking this year!

          Love the painting!

          ~Laura~

          • Michael Edwards

            What spirit will you get?
            Mines a ton and ginic.

            • LaurašŸŒ»

              The Glenlivet12

              Heā€™s a single malt scotch whisky man!

              • Michael Edwards

                He must be a good man...!

                • LaurašŸŒ»

                  That he is!šŸ˜Š

                • Neville

                  I was not expecting the end, but it made me chuckle, no end.. cheers

                • dusk arising

                  Always plenty of spirit to be found in the next bottle sir.

                  • Michael Edwards

                    If you can find it when you're p****d. šŸ¤¢

                  • orchidee

                    Coooeeeee M. That evening OK? Got any bottle for the evening?!

                    • Michael Edwards

                      Sloe gin which I'm drinking quickly. Hic



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