Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
Versal Law
You whisper soft
And
Your words
Become lessons
You write words
And
They become law…
As
We make love
Our
Bodies merge
As one
With heaven
Tis a perfectly
Natural versal law…
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: You can beat an egg, you can beat a carpet, and ya can beat about the bush, but you can't beat that good old Versal Law...
- Category: Erotic
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Swoon! I thought ya was writing some 'laws of poetry' or summat. Now I gotta have a lie down to recover. lol.
no rush, take your time & thanks for visiting.. Neville
You can read it either way - complete law or a law starting with the flourish of manuscript but it doesn't matter - love stretching and pulling the language beyond the usual comfort zones - as Uncle Fred said - 'Go with the flow'.
the term 'Versal' is my own little neologism, and of which I am a little bit proud... it has poetic connotations, or at least, in my mind it does.. as in verse, stanza etc... poetic license & all that jazz...
Makes even more sense now.
I also meant to add universal connotations, but anyway, I shall thank you again... thank you again..
Super verse (or should that be versal)
thank you is pretty near uni versal.. thank you
You create gentle erotica so easily Nev. - -- and after an extra busy day I shall read this again and take the feel of that Versal Law with me to bed..... and so to dream.......... x
How good is that... thank you Fay... sleep tight.. N
'Tis veryily good says I - - - - - have an enjoyable Sunday my friend................. x
indeed.. and you too Fay x
Eroticism requires no translation,
whether written, spoken or acted,
where two bodies are entangled,
silence is its own composition
how very true... thank you Suresh..
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