E-mail to God.
Dear God, I am riting this to let you no
My Mom's coff got worse and she's now ad to go.
I dont no your E-mail but your everywhere
So sum angel will give it you God, cos you care.
Mom's gone to an ospital they called a Respite
I think that's the name - an I hope it's spelled rite.
They won't let me go cause it's too far away.
But they dont no she hates eggs, an she wont say.
'Er pane isn't bad when she first gets in bed
But she likes extra pillas God, under er head.
My Mom's got red air tho she's not got much now
But she likes it combed gently or else there's a row.
She's got such good skin an a beootiful smile
She likes frilly nightys an keepin' up style.
I 'ope someone there reads to 'er each single nite
Then says God bless ya an' ope bed bugs dont bite.
I thought I would tell you sum things they wont no
And God, cos your busy, I will sign this off now.
But I so want to say - - - just before I press send,
She's got nobody there so please God, be 'er frend.
,
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: December 24th, 2018 09:26
- Comment from author about the poem: Written some time ago but back by special request. Hope you like this poignant read and can understand the childish spelling.
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What a delightful yet sad read - I so much enjoyed it and would never have put your name to it Fay but so glade you did write it. May I wish you all the very best and here's to another 12 months of great poetry.
Ah - tis suprising what my pen achieves when in the mood for becoming another's gladness or grief - - thanks a load Michael for all your support. Very best of seasonal wishes to you.
My Dear Fay,
This is absolutely a beautiful but somewhat sad poem that pulls at my heartstrings! As I read it, I was vividly reminded of the time my grandfather was ill and the end was near! I wished and hoped with all my might that he would be okay because they told me that God would take care of him! I was barely four years old at the time of his passing!
Thank you for this share!
~Laura~
Laura your comment shows that a child's words to God can pull us back to days long ago - thank you my dear friend for sharing your own heartache on losing a loved grandfather. May i wish you a blessed season of festivity and a healthy year to come.
Thank you my dear friend.❤️ I would also like to wish you a Happy and Healthy Christmas! 🌟
Thanks FAY for a beautiful Bitter - Sweet poem. You have a Poets mind and in this Poem you have perfectly encapsulted ~ the MIND ~ Spelling and Spiritually of young child ~ awesome ! The child is concerned about all the little things that would ameliorate her MUMS stay in Hospital. Extra pillas ~ hair combed genty ~ frilly nighty ~ someone to read to 'er and a FREND ~ AMEN If only we could PRAY that intelligently and that direct ! The WORLD would be a much better place ~ AMEN ! Love through Poetry !
BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Yes indeed through a child's eyes we can learn a whole world of innocent directness even when writing to God - so pleased you enjoyed the read . Wishing you loads of seasonal togetherness even though you are both far apart - and may 2019 bless you with springtime excitement when meeting at last your dreams will be realized.
A fine child-like write Fay.
Thank you Orchi - -merry Christmas to you dear poet-friend.
what an absolutely splendid poem Fay.. you have captured a little girls heartfelt Christmas plea so bloomin well here.... bless ya and true
Seasons Best and All Good Things to you and yours... Neville
Very grateful for your visit and read of a child's requests to God for a Mum's safe keeping - - your comments show your warm heart was moved. Festive greetings dear Neville.
nowt but a true pleasure Fay... I was about to post the following before reading your little gem
Dear Jesus
Dear Jesus
I’ve been
Good
Like you
Told my
Mum
I should
The day my
Daddy came
To live
With you
Now
I’m big
I don’t
Need a
Christmas tree
I want
No more
Little
Boys or girls
To hurt like me
Thank you
Sir
Love
You lots
Neville V Pettitt
Yew Tree House
Church Hill
Hollowell
England
Amen
touching write,,merry christmas
Hi Ron - good to see you back here again - thanks for your visit and comment on the pleas of a child for a Mum's safe keeping - - -it certainly can touch the heart. Happy Christmas dear friend.
What a beautiful sadly emotive write, it brought such emotion to me.
Thank you for all your wonderful poems on here Fay.
Have e very good Christmas.
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