dusk arising

LOOKING FORWARD

and now eyes which look back
look forward
with yesterdays regret
what pallid change will future hold
how many more years
still remain
watching yesterdays children
punished by each day

Comments5

  • Goldfinch60

    Each New Year is unknown and all we can hope for is that it will be a good and fulfilling year.

  • Michael Edwards

    Each day is a bonus so here's to the unknown future.

  • Neville

    I like these words, you have made me exercise my mental muscle this mane... 🙂

  • Fay Slimm.

    A clever play on words in this seriously good write describing the scary changes faced as youth grows into adulthood -

  • Candlewitch

    I completely agree with Claudelle! you are amazing and I love the way your mind works and how you express yourself!

    *hugs, Cat



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