fuche_bu

DAREDEVIL SQUIRREL

I spy squirrel

air raiding the birdfeeder

deftly stealing food

upside down daredevil

effortless execution.

Comments5

  • psychofemale

    haha, cute and funny poem :)

    • fuche_bu

      thank you for reading and commenting.

    • Claudelle DeLuna

      Great tanka poem!
      It looks like the spying is from both sides just look at those eyes!
      She is writing a comeback poem..lol
      😊✌

      • fuche_bu

        She did quickly dash off before I could take a better picture. When we see an asshole human inside the window with a camera poem that might be her response. thanks for reading.

      • Goldfinch60

        So true, in a previous house we had squirrels come into they garden, not only did they eat the seed put out for the birds they destroyed two bird feeders doing it.

        • fuche_bu

          I have other squirrel poems--if I find them. This is an ongoing battle.

        • Michael Edwards

          Great write - gave me a smile.

          • fuche_bu

            thank you for reading and commenting

          • orchidee

            Good write Fuche. yes, I saw some more squirrels only today, bounding from a shed roof to tree branches.



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