A dreamer he
will no more be
he dived in the pond to capture the moon
let’s hope they retrieve his body soon.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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I love this for lots of different reasons. It reminds me of the protaginist in my book and of the dichotomy of dreaming.
Only people who rise from slumber ever dream.
Whatever that means 😪
He will be with the moon that he captured.
A slice of life - cheers Andy
A fine write and pic M. Miss Berles dived in?!
She did straight into a hole in the Emmental
I don\'t like Emmental cheese. I only eat the holes in it. (I quite like it really - bit twangy). Do you eat the holes in Polo mints or doughnuts?
No but I do suck my Polo mints backwards.
I've gone mad with these evenings. Asking the same thing two or three times in comments. Finger slipped and kept pressing Send. lol.
I do like your little nuggets - they're finger slippin' good.
Very DROLL UNCLE MIKE ! JUST HAVING AN EARLY LUNCH ~ Hairdressing Science @ 1 pm ~ Never a dull moment ! Love the ABSTRCT with the transient water colour ! We are all dreamers and Ive dived ino some murky waters in my time ~ like the Leeds Liverpool canal and survived (after a stomch pump !) Yours as aways BRIAN !
Yes a slightly looser and more fluid approach - pleased you like it.
is this a tragedy, wimsey or a comedy by any chance... enjoyed tho and that watercolour is summat else... N
Written with tongue in cheek so whatever you want it to be pleased you like the watercolour.
i do indeed...
Hauntingly tragic but important and inspiring nonetheless. I'm forever a fan of your ability to conjure emotion with so few words. It's good to be back and see poems such as these, especially from you.
You are so kind - I really do appreciate your encouragement. Thanks Aislinn
hahahahaha! He was stupid if you ask me (no one did). Love the "looser and more fluid"...........
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