Fay Slimm

LAMENT.

 

 

Lament.

 

Never will sighs go so deeply again.


Go tell the sea that he,
who was the flame of my life, brave
knight who took me inside
his heartfelt inferno of kindness, who
tenderly taught me desire
can no longer move distance to prove
love's tides can ride me
to shore for he sank in the fatal flood
where void and troubleless
he lies but my lament on losing such
lover will never be ending
for nothing can ease my heart's pain
which continues so raw.


Never will time have meaning again.  

Comments7

  • Neville

    this is indeed a lament... no other title would come close.... even I ache having read these fine words...

    • Fay Slimm

      You have discerned the reason for writing this cry of lament in your perceptive comment dear Neville - thanks for confessing to feeling an empathetic ache --- twas painful to put on paper

      • Neville

        of that, I have no doubt... I do so hope your pain has eased since originally inspired to put pen to paper.... I keep my fingers crossed and shall perform a little embu upon the mane.... N

      • orchidee

        A fine write Fay.

        • Fay Slimm

          Sincere thanks Orchi.

        • Diamond

          A heartfelt and touching Poetry, dear Fay.

          • Fay Slimm

            Grateful for your visit and encouraging in-put Diamond and an honour that it is now in your favourites.

          • tepo

            Ouch
            Irreplaceable
            But what memories

            • Fay Slimm

              Ah- your comment has the mark of a wise and kind reader dear Tepo - memory can be the means of re-living true love. Thanks a load for your visit and in-put.

            • Claudelle DeLuna

              Excellent poem! Fay
              Wholehearted
              Bless day dear lady,
              😊🌹

              • Fay Slimm

                Humbly grateful for your visit and encouraging comment dear Claudelle - - the poem described time that to me was so very special - - thank you for your support.

              • Michael Edwards

                Nor waves of laughter sweep the shore - great write Fay.

                • Fay Slimm

                  A good line to have brought in as a finalé to this lament dear Michael - thanks a load for the visit and comment.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Wonderful emotive write Fay, so sad.



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