Lament.
Never will sighs go so deeply again.
Go tell the sea that he,
who was the flame of my life, brave
knight who took me inside
his heartfelt inferno of kindness, who
tenderly taught me desire
can no longer move distance to prove
love's tides can ride me
to shore for he sank in the fatal flood
where void and troubleless
he lies but my lament on losing such
lover will never be ending
for nothing can ease my heart's pain
which continues so raw.
Never will time have meaning again.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: January 10th, 2019 04:36
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Comments4
this is indeed a lament... no other title would come close.... even I ache having read these fine words...
You have discerned the reason for writing this cry of lament in your perceptive comment dear Neville - thanks for confessing to feeling an empathetic ache --- twas painful to put on paper
of that, I have no doubt... I do so hope your pain has eased since originally inspired to put pen to paper.... I keep my fingers crossed and shall perform a little embu upon the mane.... N
A fine write Fay.
Sincere thanks Orchi.
Nor waves of laughter sweep the shore - great write Fay.
A good line to have brought in as a finalé to this lament dear Michael - thanks a load for the visit and comment.
Wonderful emotive write Fay, so sad.
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