Street Art
No not porn tis street art
Take a look
a good look mind
and then another look
If you would be so kind
When looked and seen
pray tell
where would you have
those tiny circles been
and then
my how their backs did arc
no space between
to slip a brush or pen
because they needed not
No not porn tis street art
and he thought of you again.....
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Author:
Neville (
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I have seen some wonderful street art in my time, 'tis a pity it gets cleaned away.
Thank you for visiting these words...
Anything swoony in this if I read between the lines?! heehee.
No.. nothing at all but I have no objection to you checking.. the swooner the better..
Something about backs arching? Whoops! I would not know about this, of course. lol.
could be a severe dystonic reaction to something.. maybe
This instilled different notions in my head.
Very different.
Then I thought I didn't understand it at all.
But isn't that what is great about art. You think you see it, then you don't
Happy Monday 🙃
thank you sylviasearcher.. I shall treat that as a compliment, if you dont mind.. Happy Monday to you too....
Sure, you could take it as a compliment.
I'm not good with compliments.
They weren't shown to me often enough to understand how they work.
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Well I read into it but it doesn't matter does it? Great write which ever way you take it.
thank you sir...
You using that dystonia as an excuse, or maybe as a way to stop me swooning?! heehee.
I appreciate it's a real unpleasant condition to experience though.
I see you are repeating yourself now too.. are you paraphrasing or echolailic .. 🙂
Doh! I'm keen. I said it twice, I said 'I said it...…' Wish I would shut up. lol
not to worry...
Though provoking and confusing .... but... i came out of it thinking about crowds of people gathering around a patch of pubic hair..... those little circles.... curly wirly pubes...
Now that would be street art... till the breeze picks up
thanks, but do keep taking them pills
I love to see street art 🙂
some of it is very good indeed.. thank you..
Your first and last line takes the reader in a certain direction, just to be confused by the rest. In certain cities, like Pasadena, Californis,mint,mistreat art has been elevated to an annual event - though temporary it leaves a lasting memory, just as your poem
thank you for taking a peek at these words.... and educating me....
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