Precocious.
Invisible dancer, Air moves with ease
buoyantly changing her imprint
on earth's waiting surface of seasons,
yet windswept Air broadcasts ferment
of ever-mutating chicanery
by playing with weather's uncertainty.
Air can create dazzle-white sculptures
by modified temperature shift
producing from skirts of icier currents
drifts of her colder underslip
as autumn- gold's feel of mellowness
ends in blows bent on mischief.
Yet when sunk in summer depression
breathless Air forgets to ruffle
sails' limp need for windy adventures
as changeling ether favours no bluster
of increase when ballet-laced
lungs tiptoe thru' sea with slow pulse.
From waltz to flamingo on coastal hills
Air loves feeling freedom where
cliffs can hone Divas precocious skills.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: January 15th, 2019 05:18
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GOOD MORNING FAY ! ANGELA here its 11pm ! Love the picture : I love all the pictures of Powerful Ladies : This one could be captioned PHYSIOTERRORIST : We exercise great power over our CLIENTS ! I always tell them (If they question my exercise & diet regime !) NO GAIN WITHOUT PAIN.
Love your poem too ! Your Lady has freedom of her BODY MIND & SPIRIT : She moves with Grace & Energy in all SEASONS ! Thanks for writing in Praise of Women : All DIVAS are PRECOCIOUS ! Thanks for sharing.
Love in the SPIRIT : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check HAPPINESS : Brians Love Poem to ME : Thanks
Yes this Lady Air is free to do as she pleases in ever season - I love personification and so glad you enjoyed the read dear Angela.
A fine write again Fay.
Humble thanks Orchi.
probably one of the least precocious poems I've read for hours.. and I been reading Blood Axe Poems of the year circa 2003 since 08.00hrs this very mane... nice one Fay
We in these exposed parts of the coast call this Lady Air truly precocious - she who changes direction or force at will sinks many a boat with her fickle behaviour - - I like to personify whenever I can - and glad you enjoyed the read dear Neville.
personify by all means and whenever necessary.. now let that be a warning to all you fickle and precocious gusts of hot or cold air blown indiscriminately at any would be victim off the Kernow/Cornish coast..
Your creative mind works on a plane of its own - super poetry.
Awe - - thanks galore - -you honour me Michael - glad you liked the read.
A sweet write
Most impressive
Super write, the wonder of the way air plays with us can be sublime as are your words Fay.
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