TAKE WING.

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Take Wing.

 

Let loose the ties of your heart
and shake free stifled hopes from tight grip 
of close- feathered defeats.

 

Boundless choice will supply appeal.

Do not expire before living your dream.  

Take wing into easier airways 
of unrestrained faith where failure ceases
and lifted are fears.

 

Swoop not to revenge or regret 

for their flightless ferment oozes distress.

 

Find your zeal within 
life's spacious fields of learnt forgiveness

and seek between weeds

every edible love-seed to pick

and gratefully eat while still on the wing.

 

Allow belief to fly.  

Reach for contentment's achievable height.

Peace is your birthright.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 16th, 2019 05:04
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Neville

    another uplifting little bit of magic here.... delightful our Fay and true... N

    • Fay Slimm.

      Ah just maybe this bit of uplift will set readers looking for wings of peace when life gets too rough - - - so pleased you found delight in the read dear Neville.

      • Neville

        I did indeed Fay.. it was smashing..

      • Michael Edwards

        Interesting construction - fine work and work it does.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Yes the construction took a longer time than I hoped but good that you thought it worked Michael.

        • Netashi

          Beautiful words indeed written again by you Fay. Keep up the amazing work.
          -T

          • Fay Slimm.

            Ah thank you for the visit and comment on a subject I felt needed airing dear friend - - flying freely to peace at times is what we all need - - thank you again for your visit and in-put.

          • orchidee

            A fine write Fay.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Sincere thanks for your visit and read dear Orchi.

            • Goldfinch60

              I want to be a buzzard and just hang in the wind. Beautiful write Fay.

              • Fay Slimm.

                Wheee - - Hang on in that wind and I will be joining you dear Goldi-Buzzard because l too I have always wished to grow wings and fly. -- Thanks so much for your support of my work.

              • ANGELA & BRIAN

                Good Evening FAY : ANGELA here its 8 am here ! Thanks for your Picture & Poem. We love the MESSAGE of your Poem : To forget past Failures and aim a bit lower : and to forget revenge & regret and to learn FORGIVENESS ~ AMEN.
                Pick edible Love-seed and reach for Contentment & Peace : LOVE IT !
                Thanks for caring & sharing
                Love through Poetry : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Good evening now from me with my sincere thank you dear Angela for your comment after the read of flying to peace........... we need more awareness of the power in forgiveness when life becomes a tough road to tred. Hugs and best wishes from Fay in Cornwall U.K.

                • dusk arising

                  Positivity reigns here, as it does with me.
                  An uplifting read.

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    Many thanks D.A. for highlighting the need for positive thinking if we wish to grow wings and fly to freedom.



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