747
Commercial jet airliner
High in the sky
Boeing seven four seven.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: You can thank 'dusk arising' for this one comments made against my 575 syllable poems which I posted yesterday.
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Clever write Michael.
Thanks Andy. I have to say I was really pleased with the sheer simplicity of the words and the link between subject and syllable count. Simplicity is often more difficult than complexity.
Yes, you sorted out those syllables well. Did Miss Berles help you with this one?
She sorted it out with her Russian friend, Rue Berles.
How's the evening going?!
Who is Eve Ning?
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : very droll love the shape complementing the 575 :you could call it a UKIAH ! Good morning (its 10 pm here the working week is OVER !) Love the cool picture : Late Summer UK judging by the trees ?
Blessings through POETRY : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Yes - strictly I guess it is a ukiah but I do like to simply refer to these forms by their syllable count as purists can get very tetchy if they don\'t comply with strict \'rules\'. yes late summer I guess but an invented scene.
yes indeed, very clever
Thanks N
my pleasure
Bless you Claudelle
OK, do you remember the old 60's disc dance tune by wilson pickett entitled '6345789' ?
Is this another challenge? Your time this time.
i keep arithmetic and poetry separate. in my opinion the two should never be mixed (i have said this many times) because the result is a compromise.
Michael,
Great write and painting!
747...
This reminded me of my parents’ first time traveling in a Boing 747! They bought new luggage with a combination lock. Guess what the combination was to unlock their new suitcases?
~Laura~
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