Tune: Duke Street
('Fight the good fight')
Mark 5 v.32-44
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Jesus met crowd, had compassion
His love, heart, went out to each one
For they were as sheep, no shepherd
Now voice of good Shepherd they heard
The day went on, then 'twas evening
The crowd no food did with them bring
But Jesus said, What food, any
Is there, disciples go and see
They found out five loaves, two fishes
But how this meet the crowd's wishes?
For them to all be fed, this small
Amount, how shall it feed them all?
Jesus said for all to sit on grass
Time for provision did not pass
Was not missed, for Jesus did take
The food and blessed it for their sake
Then gave to the disciples there
To distribute to each a share
And they did all eat, had enough
Gathered up all the extra stuff
Was twelve baskets full, the surplus
All there were fed without a fuss
E'en over five thousand, they saw
And ate of the Lord's gracious store
Amazing grace, vast multitude
They did eat, were refreshed, renewed
The Lord's glory they saw, rejoiced
His great workings they told and voiced
- Author: orchidee ( Offline)
- Published: January 24th, 2019 02:58
- Comment from author about the poem: A hymn-poem in 8.8.8.8. metre. The miracle is even more amazing, as some Gospels say 'Five thousand men, besides women and children'. So over 5,000 people, and 12 baskets of food over at the end! Though commonly called 'The Feeding of the 5,000'.
- Category: Spiritual
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Comments5
Fine work - your standards never drop Orchi.
Thanks Michael. I run out of letters at times - the 'd', then the 'a' recently. I think you used them all up. I will have to get here earlier before supplies run out!
If you are short of punctuation marks see my comment under my posting 'Arty Couplets' - that's funny - who is Arty Couplets ?
Ahh, Arty is me old mate. I know him well. Do you know 'Punk' Tu-Ation? What is his real first name?
Are you confused with Accent U Ation /
I have often wondered about this
Ooh there's all sorts of people hiding on 'ere - Sylla Berles (syllables); Arty Couplets; etc. Even some families: e.g. Ram Berles (rambles); Sim[Simon] Berles (cymbals); etc.
Thanks UNCLE STEVE ~ Great hym & Scipture ~ Only JESUS could do that ! That it was a real MIRACLE is attested ~ because the Scripture says that because of what happened ~ The Disciples believed in HIM ! Love the POEM.
Blessings & Love in the SPIRIT
Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Thanks B&A.
Orchi,
Great writing! Thank you for sharing!
Have a wonderful day!
~Laura~
Thanks Laura.
Another good one Orchi.
I see you have used the song you had at your wedding to KP.
Thanks Gold. Ahh yes, I should have added 'This is set to the tune of he well-known hymn for marriage services' - well, my KP marriage anyway. She don't improve much.
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