When They Took Away the Tumour
When they took away the tumour
They left us with a scar
Yet my love goes so much further
Than the star I named for her
Some scars go on forever
Whilst others not so far
Yet my love flows so much deeper
Than all the oceans sailed for her
When they took away the tumour
They left us with a scar
Yet my love is so much brighter
Than the brightest super nova to be sure
When they took away the tumour
They left us with a scar
Yet my love for her is stronger
Than the strongest super-steel or super glue
I just wanted you to know that
So I send it in this scribble
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Comments6
Neville,
I love your “scribble”!
A beautiful and loving poem for your wife!
Glad the tumour is gone! Scars are an important. They reminds us to hold dear the ones we love!
The scar is there and your love is stronger than ever!
Exquisite!
~Laura~
You are very kind Laura & he thanks you or it...... Have a super weekend... N
Super sensitive write - I can empathise - My wife had kidney cancer 7 years ago and had to have a kidney removed - the surgery was touch and go but she pulled through and is still clear. She has a 14ins scar but I love it - it means she is still with me. Thanks for posting this Neville.
Thank you Michael.. much appreciated.. regards to both you and your wife.. Neville
Yes, glad is all well now. We might never know what some folk have been through. We had special prayers for a couple of church members. But they 'departed'. Some say there is healing in that - relief from pain, etc. I might have supported them more, but did not know them too closely.
Thank you for visiting and for the kind sentiment you have left behind, both are of course appreciated.... Cheers, Neville
Wonderful write, your love shines through your words Neville.
Bless ya Goldfinch60, tis nice to be reminded every now and again of the feelings we sometimes take for granted.... a much appreciated visit & true..... Neville
Life'sa bitch but what have we without it...?
Super write Neville
thank you sir... you are quite the sage my friend & true.... Neville
Heartfelt 💜
thank you my friend....
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