What We Got

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  Michael Edwards January 27th, 2019 01:32

  I look at things from both sides now - great concept well expressed and great result.

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    NevilleJanuary 27th, 2019 01:36

    Funny innit... I suspect our respective review comments must have crossed in the ether... cheers Michael, tis appreciated....... N

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  Goldfinch60 January 27th, 2019 02:42

  If we all saw things in the same way it would be a very boring world.

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    NevilleJanuary 27th, 2019 02:47

    it would indeed be uniform & where's the beauty in that... unless its a French Maids uniform or summat similar maybe.... Cheers N

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  orchidee January 27th, 2019 03:08

  A fine write Neville. OK - I'll still want ya. I won't leave ya. I'll stay and sing to ya, mind ya. Would ya rather I left?!

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    NevilleJanuary 27th, 2019 03:20

    thank you orchidee... no, I would rather you write...

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    orchideeJanuary 27th, 2019 03:24

    I ain't done 700 hymn-poems though, mind ya. Some are 'said' writes with no tune!

3 more comments

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  Laura🌻 January 27th, 2019 06:19

  Neville,
  
  Look at both sides of the coin and then flip it!
  After all is said and done,
  you “have nothing left to lose” and she “will still want” to hold on to you...
  just like holding on to a treasured and rare gold coin!
  
  A fine write which I enjoyed reading!
  Thank you for sharing your poetic pen!
  
  Have a wonderful Sunday!
  
  ~Laura~
  

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    NevilleJanuary 27th, 2019 06:25

    Thank you so much for your luverly comment my friend... a much appreciated visit if ever there was
    
    Neville

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  Andrew Charles Forrest January 27th, 2019 06:26

  Well Neville great wrte made me think of Joni Mitchells song Clouds Very reflective and hard hittings but different times.. Well done you

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    NevilleJanuary 27th, 2019 06:30

    Thank you sir... you just made my day..... Neville

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  Mottakeenur Rehman January 27th, 2019 08:04

  Superb...heart touching!

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    NevilleJanuary 27th, 2019 12:19

    How very kind, thank you... Neville

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    Mottakeenur RehmanJanuary 27th, 2019 14:02

    💖🖋🙏👌☺

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  dusk arising January 27th, 2019 14:17

  As the psychiatrist told me 'speaking to your second personality, i'd get out now whilst you still can'.
  I asked him for a second opinion.

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    NevilleJanuary 27th, 2019 14:40

    I second that.. cheers

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  sylviasearcher January 28th, 2019 04:08

  Thought provoking.
  
  At first I read this like a person comparing himself to another, differing perspectives that cannot be reconciled. Though the I seemed supreme. The I seemed worthy. The I had something to lose.
  
  Then I read it like a conversation between self and societal norms and judgements. How society tries to bend people to fit preconceived ideas and notions, until individuation is gone and then there is nothing left of the self.
  
  Then of course I thought of two inner voice fighting amongst themselves.
  
  Thought-provoking.

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    NevilleJanuary 28th, 2019 04:14

    cheers my friend... much appreciated and true.......

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  Suresh July 1st, 2019 22:53

  I am me, you are what I want to be
  
  Have often thought on these lines, that you have expressed so well

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    NevilleJuly 2nd, 2019 03:33

    You are so very kind.. sometimes, far too good for words... but always welcome and appreciated... Neville