Countless Indiscretions

Neville

Countless Indiscretions

 

On reflection

There were so many indiscretions

And infidelities

So many imperfections

Not to mention

Long lost bedroom keys

 

On reflection

There were so many misconceptions

And insecurities

So many wrong assumptions

Not to mention

Bedroom freeze

 

But hey

 

If you would dare rotate your hips tonight

Against

The rhythm and the flow of my finger tips

Tonight

Then I will make you fly again

 

Regardless of those

Indiscretions and your infidelities

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 30th, 2019 11:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: No clues..... that is, if you were gonna ask... You are just going to have to make your own mind up.....
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 87
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
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  • Netashi

    intriguing indeed great and passionate write. Keep up the great work.
    - T

  • Neville

    intriguing is good enough for me.. many thanks my friend.... Neville

  • Michael Edwards

    And I'm still making it up but that doesn't matter - its beauty lies in the words - love it.

    • Neville

      Good Evening Michael... thank you sir... tis good to be back.... Neville

    • Laura🌻

      Neville,

      As I said in another comment, I DO enjoy your writings...and this is no exception!
      No declarations on your part, I know!
      I must be honest and say some are relatable; but as you stated, “Regardless of those...”
      All’s well on the home front!😉

      ~Laura~

      • Neville

        Laura, you are far to kind for words and your reasoned responses are so encouraging... I just wanna say a bloomin great big thank you.. so I'm gonna do just that THANK YOU ...... N x

      • dusk arising

        Yeah, when two people have something which is 'right'.... celebrate the 'right' you share.... the rest is.... well its just the rest isn't it.

        • Neville

          Absolutely, many thanks indeed... am not even gonna try to formulate a witty response... coz I really appreciate your luverly comment above .... Cheers, N

        • orchidee

          Is this a poem about flying lessons? I dunno these things. I've lost the plot of the poem I reckon! lol.

          • Neville

            Yes.. tis about flying .... cheers orchidee.... I shall catch ya later...... N 🙂

          • Fay Slimm.

            Love the original way you use rhymed words in this read Neville - - the piece flows with poetic form and style and the clever but gentle erotica discreetly added makes that finalé extra special.

            • Neville

              Thank you so very much dear Fay, I am truly ever so grateful for your continued encouragement and support.... Neville

            • psychofemale

              nice one 🙂 thank you for sharing

              • Neville

                thank you psychofemale much appreciated... N

              • Goldfinch60

                May you both fly in your wonderful sensual world Neville.

                • Neville

                  what a wonderful thought.. how very kind Goldfinch60.... N

                • sylviasearcher

                  I made my mind up. Don't ask though.

                  It flowed like you were trying to gently persuade.

                  • Neville

                    aint gonna.... thanks tho



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