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Michael Edwards

 

 

 

A plate of pink prawns

They are ready to consume

Are they born naked?

 

In drunken stupor

Slowly sinking to the ground

Cuddling a lamppost.

 

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  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 1st, 2019 03:27
  • Comment from author about the poem: I have painted a series of penguin pictures which have also appeared on cards. I work out the design first and keep the line drawings (in what you might call a design reference book) for future reference should I wish to repeat any of them. This is the first of the series.
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  • orchidee

    Fine writes and pic M.

  • Neville

    there is a fine line between good and great both on the brush & the pen, not to forget the palate... I love prawns and have slid down many a fine lamp post in me time... a stroke of near genius, methinks.. N

    • Michael Edwards

      Thanks Neville - did you spot the errant 'T' under the second poem? Don't know where that came from.

      • Neville

        I wont tell ya what I made of that...my pleasure regardless... N

      • orchidee

        Ooh an extra 'T', yes? That mean 'time for tea now'? How much are 'T's these days to use errantly?

        • Michael Edwards

          Each 'T' is 7/6d - that's 3 half crowns.

          Whoever wears a half crown?

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          Orchidee suggests HAIKU about Naked Prawn should be 18 ?

          Lamposts are one of Natures great blessings ~ Amen

          Thanks for sharing & caring. ~ I have a new Windscreen Cover featuring Penguins ~ great characters ! Love & Bicuits ~
          BRIAN & ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก

          • Michael Edwards

            Mea culpa - should have marked it 18+

            What type of biscuits?

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              DIGESTIVES (Nudge Nudge Elbow Elbow ~ say no more !)
              Plain & chocolate ~ I have both for worthy visitors !
              Yous as always BRIAN The Biscuit Man

              • Michael Edwards

                Wow - a biscuit party. ๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š

              • dusk arising

                You have to be well oiled to slide down a lamppost these days. For what resides at its base? how oft has it been christened/claimed/marked out by a passing canine or maybe one could encounter one of our growing homeless community using the lamplight to read yesterdays Telegraph.
                Shall we have a glut of prawns post brexit?

                • Michael Edwards

                  I HAVE MANY A CROSS WORD TO SAY ABOUT THE Telegraph - in fact its best bits are the crosswords. Good idea to post Brexit - where do we address it to and what its got to do with the prawns - better ask Orchi.

                  Oops - sorry about the caps - the lock was on.

                • dusk arising

                  You have to be well oiled to slide down a lamppost these days. For what resides at its base? how oft has it been christened/claimed/marked out by a passing canine or maybe one could encounter one of our growing homeless community using the lamplight to read yesterdays Telegraph.
                  Shall we have a glut of prawns post brexit?

                • Goldfinch60

                  Good fun writes Michael.



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