Stop struggling little fish
Stop struggling
And I will sit by you
And stop struggling too
Together we will explore
This new state
Of unambitious fate
And because we have each other
We can agree as breath slows
That Quiet is the friend
We will invite to join us
For he too knows
There is no need for noise ever again
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Author:
Lorna (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Hello..........
- Category: Reflection
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Comments9
Simply beautiful
Thanks sweetie........
seriously good
How nice - thank you Neville.....
pleasure.. and all mine..... Neville
Lorna,
So happy to see your posting!
Reading the poem and listening to the song brought tears to my eyes!
So many emotions tapping at the heart! I feel for you my dear poetic friend!
Sending much love your way!❤️
~Laura~
Lovely Laura - I am posting less because if I try to force "every day" the poems get sloppier and sloppier. Sorry they seem to be in such a sad vein these days. All your comments are so comforting and helpful........
No worries my friend! No apologies necessary! I totally understand! Just know that I’m here if you need anything...anything at all!
I’m glad the comments are helpful!😘
Hugs 🤗 🤗
~Laura~🌻
Great to see you posting - missed your work and you are back with a great read.
You're lovely and kind as usual Michael......... Penguins and all. Thought of another one - Penguin pulling another penguin on water skiis ( damn how to spell?) with maybe junior on shoulders..... oh dear they're in my head now.
Sounds great - now all I need is a bit of time to put them all together. Thanks so much.. I did a series of gnome cartoons a few years back and they somewhat took over my life - mind it doesn't happen to you. lol
That would be frustrating as my artistic (drawing) talents are hiding somewhere ... at least I've never been able to find them..... so that would be a headful of gnomes stuck in the medulla oblongata - what a mess.
Especially if you met my two starring gnomes - Barrington and Athelstan - they featured very British humour.
A fine write Lorna.
Lovely Orchi come to visit........ stay for tea!
You see, we have missed you, and not forgotten about you either. Your poetic prose will endure the over whelming attention you so deserve. Writing such beautiful silent things. Gorgeous to see you back.
Kevin - this is an overwhelmingly beautiful set of comments which I will cherish. You are lovely.
And, so are you.
Hold me in your thoughts
Take me to your dreams
Touch me as i fall into view
When the Winter comes .........
Keep me in yours heart for while !
Lovely song Lorna ~ thanks for sharing
Love the Poem ~ Fish expire without air & we expire witout love !
Blessings ~ BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check "Love me love my cat" ~ Thanks
He was dying (terminal lung cancer) when he wrote that song Brian and made it a point to have it be the last song he recorded. Isn't it beautiful. Thanks for your comments.....
amazing, ty for sharing with us 🙂
Glad you liked - thank you!
That quiet can be so wonderful Lorna it is always a friend.
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