The End

Lorna



Stop struggling little fish

Stop struggling

And I will sit by you

And stop struggling too

Together we will explore

This new state

Of unambitious fate

And because we have each other

We can agree as breath slows

That Quiet is the friend

We will invite to join us

For he too knows

There is no need for noise ever again

  • Author: Lorna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 4th, 2019 07:06
  • Comment from author about the poem: Hello..........
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 75
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻, whisperingquill.
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Comments9

  • sylviasearcher

    Simply beautiful

    • Lorna

      Thanks sweetie........

    • Neville

      seriously good

      • Lorna

        How nice - thank you Neville.....

        • Neville

          pleasure.. and all mine..... Neville

        • Laura🌻

          Lorna,

          So happy to see your posting!
          Reading the poem and listening to the song brought tears to my eyes!
          So many emotions tapping at the heart! I feel for you my dear poetic friend!

          Sending much love your way!❤️

          ~Laura~

          • Lorna

            Lovely Laura - I am posting less because if I try to force "every day" the poems get sloppier and sloppier. Sorry they seem to be in such a sad vein these days. All your comments are so comforting and helpful........

            • Laura🌻

              No worries my friend! No apologies necessary! I totally understand! Just know that I’m here if you need anything...anything at all!
              I’m glad the comments are helpful!😘

              Hugs 🤗 🤗

              ~Laura~🌻

            • Michael Edwards

              Great to see you posting - missed your work and you are back with a great read.

              • Lorna

                You're lovely and kind as usual Michael......... Penguins and all. Thought of another one - Penguin pulling another penguin on water skiis ( damn how to spell?) with maybe junior on shoulders..... oh dear they're in my head now.

                • Michael Edwards

                  Sounds great - now all I need is a bit of time to put them all together. Thanks so much.. I did a series of gnome cartoons a few years back and they somewhat took over my life - mind it doesn't happen to you. lol

                • 2 more comments

                • orchidee

                  A fine write Lorna.

                  • Lorna

                    Lovely Orchi come to visit........ stay for tea!

                  • kevin browne

                    You see, we have missed you, and not forgotten about you either. Your poetic prose will endure the over whelming attention you so deserve. Writing such beautiful silent things. Gorgeous to see you back.

                    • Lorna

                      Kevin - this is an overwhelmingly beautiful set of comments which I will cherish. You are lovely.

                      • kevin browne

                        And, so are you.

                      • ANGELA & BRIAN

                        Hold me in your thoughts
                        Take me to your dreams
                        Touch me as i fall into view
                        When the Winter comes .........
                        Keep me in yours heart for while !
                        Lovely song Lorna ~ thanks for sharing

                        Love the Poem ~ Fish expire without air & we expire witout love !
                        Blessings ~ BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check "Love me love my cat" ~ Thanks

                        • Lorna

                          He was dying (terminal lung cancer) when he wrote that song Brian and made it a point to have it be the last song he recorded. Isn't it beautiful. Thanks for your comments.....

                        • psychofemale

                          amazing, ty for sharing with us 🙂

                          • Lorna

                            Glad you liked - thank you!

                          • Goldfinch60

                            That quiet can be so wonderful Lorna it is always a friend.



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