575s SERIOUS (2)

Michael Edwards

 

 

Purblind opinion

Impertinent conclusions

Impudent scoundrel. 

 

In empty spaces

Searching for the great unfound

Nothing to declare.


Leaving takes one step

Arrival is different

It takes many steps

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 6th, 2019 02:36
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments7

  • Goldfinch60

    Three good ones Michael, especially the last one.

  • orchidee

    Fine writes and pics M. You know them scoundrels? - them cads, them bounders? Tally-ho and all that upper-class rubbish! lol. A super, spiffing write, what!

    • Michael Edwards

      Much appreciated don't you know. Toodle pip.

      • orchidee

        Doh! Some said - or still say: 'Yes - they're politicians!'

      • Neville

        Oh' .. another three in a row
        and while that may sound fine
        I meant another three in a line

        nicely penned whichever way ya look at it.... Neville

        • Michael Edwards

          Upside down works - cheers Neville

          • Neville

            I know, I was upside down when I first stumbled across them.. diagonally .....

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            HELLO UNCLE MIKE !
            Down a hole in the ice !
            Impudence : Emptiness : Leaving
            A rather dismal quartet this morning ?

            To cheer you up please check my
            internal-rhyme sonnet
            UNLUCKY IN LOVE !

            Love through ODES : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡

            • Michael Edwards

              He's down there fish tickling - bless him. Thanks Angela.

            • Lorna

              Junior is in trouble this morning....... unless he catches a fish down there. Impudent scoundrel indeed Sirrah!

              • Michael Edwards

                Indeed he is an impudent scoundrel but I love him for it.

              • dusk arising

                Imp is me disappearing through the hole.
                But does choosing the hole as timely escape make me imp-prudent?

                • Michael Edwards

                  Better ask Mr I Sole. - all seems a bit fishy to me.

                • Mottakeenur Rehman

                  Always great Sir!



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