UNLUCKY IN LOVE ? : ANGELA : RHYMING SONNET

ANGELA & BRIAN



THIS POEM IS BASED ON A UK SURVEY  OF 30+ LADIES

WHO SAID THEY HAD BEEN "UNLUCKY IN LOVE" !

 

I WANT someone who fits like a "Hand in a Glove"

Why must I be so unlucky in Love  ?

It is a pity : that Im not more pretty

But some MEN Ive had : have been really BAD

 

How can it be there's no one out there for ME ?

One reason WHY is the Im really SHY !

I try to be BOLD : but am I too OLD ?

The MEN that I meet are SOUR : not SWEET

 

My HEALTH lets me Down : cos it makes me Frown

I think Im a HONEY : but I aint got no MONEY !

To   find LOVE takes time : so Im never in line

Im reading the BOOK ! But I dont know where to look !

 

What about YOU : are YOU looking too ?

Dont be left behind : SEEK AND YOU TOO WILL FIND : AMEN !

  

Thanks for visiting : comments please : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡

 

This no longer applies to me : because as You know

BRIAN & I found each other TWO YEARS ago and plan

to be married at EASTER 2020 when I will be 32 and

BRIAN 36 !  However some of the TEN reasons cited

above for being "Unlucky in Love" did apply to me from

20 to 28 !  My DAD is Spanish and longed to walk his

Beautiful Daughter down the aisle with a SPECIAL MAN !

He even arranged a few dates for me ! I was career minded

and didn't finish my studies and intern until I was 24 ! 

I had a few MEN FRIENDS and then I met BRIAN and

everything fell into place !  Our love has even survived 

SEVEN MONTHS on work exchange in NZ  11,500 miles

apart !  Every Blessing Ladies your True Love is out there !   

 

TWELVE of the FOURTEEN LINES in this Sonnet have internal

Rhyme !  Personally I find if a POEM is SAD or Serious : That

internal RHYME lightens it a BIT : OK  Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡   

  • Author: ANGELA & BRIAN (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 6th, 2019 05:07
  • Category: Love
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  • orchidee

    I gave up - I'm too old! lol. A nice poem, and croon from 1949 there A&B!

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      THANKS UNCLE STEVE : Lots of my Older Friends (70+) are neutral in LOVE ! But it is ironic in the Retirement Homes that the DAMES outnumber the BEAUS 10:1 and (despite VIAGRA !) its 20 years too late ! Although some do get married and always tell me "Its just for COMPANIONSHIP !" Pleased you enjoyed the Package ! Its 8 am (THURS) here and Im getting ready for work ! Blessings & Spiritual Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

      • orchidee

        Another swoon before me bedtime soon - Viagra?! heehee.

      • Michael Edwards

        Great poem and great to hear good old PC again - I recall his TV shows - so laid back he was almost upside down.

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          YES UNCLE MIKE : Perry Como ! Great Artist : Great Song ! Brian & I love the Popular Music from the UK & USA in the 50s 60s 70s a great era. Only Tony Bennet left to fly the Ballad Flag. Most ex-Pats in NZ play that music for Parties & 60\'s Dances & Sing Alongs ! Pleased you enjoyed it !
          Love & Joy through Poetry :
          ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
          Its 8:30 am (THURS) here : First Clinic 10 am !

        • Goldfinch60

          Some people are so unfortunate not to find that right person, you have now Angela and I did so many years ago.

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            Thanks UNCLE ANDY : 8 am (FRIDAY) here just catching up on MPS comments ! YES finding Mister (or Miss) RIGHT is elusive. You & I are blessed indeed :
            Eternal Blessings & Love to you BOTH :
            ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

          • Fay Slimm.

            Good observations on the state of some relationship;s when love is a word rarely if ever mentioned - - - yet when it comes love rings its bells in our core - -- and we know --- a lovely sonnet dear Angela.

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              Many Thanks FAY : 8 am and another day here ! YES we spend Years looking for True Love but when it comes .......

              A distant bell and stars that fell :
              YES I recall the thrill of it all :
              When I found BRIAN ~ AMEN !

              Love is now all around : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              GRACIAS ANGEL ~ Por este Poesia y Canton y Photo (Un Cabalero !) There are many complementary comments ~ you have struck a right chord ! I agree with what you say about US ! We are a match made in Heaven and lots of people have remarked to me how well we are coping 11,500 miles apart ~ now for SEVEN MONTHS ~ it must be LOVE ! Like You I have been disappointed in LOVE in the PAST both those experiences taught me to recognise TRUE LOVE ~ when I found it with you ~ AMEN
              Abrazos y Besos Y todo de Mi Amor a Tu solomente !
              OSO GRANDE ~ BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

              • ANGELA & BRIAN

                GRACIAS OSO GRANDE MIO ! Pleased you liked the Picture (Un Caballero indeed) Poem & Video : I thought the song was very appropriate for us : and we have clung to each other ! YES lovely comments from our MPS Friends ! Must get ready for Work now its 8:30 am already !
                Abrazos y Besos y Todo de Mi Amor tambien !
                ANGEL 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

              • CindyB

                This is lovely! I've been lucky enough to find my soul mate & we will celebrate our 20th wedding anniversary this fall 😍
                Congrats to you two for finding & then preserving love. Love is our greatest treasure & our sweetest reward - it's the center of everything we are.

                • ANGELA & BRIAN

                  WOW CINDY 20 YEARS ! Lovely Anniversary : CHINA is the Gift (a new Dinner Service ?) and EMERALD is the Gemstone ! BRIAN & I are getting married in 2020 so well have to wait until 2040 ! YES LOVE is also our greatest treasure and our sweetest reward ! Especially as we are 11,500 miles apart : Essex (UK) & Auckland (NZ)
                  Love & every Blessing ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡



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