Perfection in person

IsraaD

If not to see you, why would the sun even bother rising?

(do I envy the sun?)

If not to touch your skin, why would the waves race to shore? 

(Am I jealous of the waves?)

If not to be compared to you, then why would flowers bloom?

Everyday that I cannot have you I sit as clouds cry your name.



  • Author: IsraaD (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 10th, 2019 02:36
  • Comment from author about the poem: Started a while ago and decided to fix it up a little. Enjoy! Feedback is appreciated :)
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Michael Edwards

    You've asked for comments but I cant think of any to offer other than to say this is a perfect little write.

    • IsraaD

      thank you so much!!

    • Goldfinch60

      Wondeful emotive write.

      • IsraaD

        Thank you! 🙂

      • SerenWise

        Lovely write and great use of formatting

        • IsraaD

          Greatly appreciated!! 🙂



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