Neville

Last Words

Last Words

 

Now I am gone

Note

How my last words

Linger

And how they

Live on

Like an echo

Bouncing off itself

Live on my love

Yes live on

In your lilac

Lavender  

Lace and lapis world

Of oh so many blues

Now I am gone

It matters not

My pulse shall

Still dance tho

In the high domes

Of Cathedrals

Where the white dove

Circles in frayed sunlight

By day it does

At least and roosts

At night

Burn no more candles tho

My love

For I am blinded

By their light and

Still shadows

Dare not

Mark or pave the way

For this pilgrims feet

 

 

 

Comments8

  • dusk arising

    A truly poetic farewell. Yes some goodbyes linger for they are a lost battle of the heart and wounds take their time to heal.
    I particularly like the way your pulse will dance on into high and wonderful places. Life goes on and has wonders yet to come.

    • Neville

      Bless ya DA.. a much appreciated visit, and thanks a million.. As one who follows a Buddhist path, I like to think maybe I might bounce back, if you catch my drift.... Neville

    • Poetic Dan

      Bless to of read your last sentiment
      Forever you'll last in many forms

      • Neville

        How delightfully kind of you Poetic Dan.. Thank you... Neville

      • orchidee

        A fine write N. Where ya gone? When will ya be back? Hop on the No.7 bus or summat - should bring ya home!

        • Michael Edwards

          Or the 34 from Arnos Grove.

          • Neville

            Thank you for visiting this page and considering these words.. Neville

          • Michael Edwards

            Some great lines Neville.

            • Neville

              much appreciated, thank you .

            • Claudelle DeLuna

              Profound poem! Neville
              πŸ’– it
              xoxo,
              😊✌

              • Neville

                thank you Claudelle x

              • orchidee

                You sorted out that propitiation? I got enough to do with all this 'vagalume' that keeps appearing elsewhere. Who is he, or what is it?! lol.

                • Neville

                  no idea... but will ask around for ya..

                • Silkseduction

                  Beautiful, Neville!

                  You’re an outstanding poet, never stop writing my friend.

                  -L

                  • Neville

                    am lost for words dear friend and poet, you are way too kind & of course always appreciated.. Neville

                  • Goldfinch60

                    May these last words fill our souls with the light that comes from them.

                    • Neville

                      what a lovely thought, or wish, or summat..thank you sir .. words appreciated and true.. N



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