SUGGESTIVELY STRUCK
Discretion surrendered
with chilling hauteur
resigned to accept
without worship or favour
a right of youths custom
imparting
bequeathing
a waxen impression
suggestively struck
by alluring red lips.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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Comments9
Superb Sir...Nice painting!!
Thanks M
Super write Michael.
I see what you mean about the minimalist concept in your artwork, it works very well.
it's amazing just how far you can reduce down by just including a few highlights where is directional change in the structure - the mind is so clever in being able to connect up and making sense of them.vn
A fine write and pic M. Did you ever meet Val (Valentine) as Gold and I did, ooh around 270AD?
I did meet Val D'Isere she's real cool man.
Can just imagine that waxen look of a red-lip-struck youth - -ha ha - - another small gem Michael. - -- p.s. - I adore the frog.
Ah thanks Fay.
Thanks UNCLE MIKE for a double attendre !
AWESOME FROG
ALLURING SNOG
Poetic Love (but not licence !)
En El Dia del Santo Valentino !
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Extra 🧡 for the FROG !
Thanks Angela
And the choirboy was struck dumb at the sight.
the dirty old bishop of birmingham
buggered his flock whilst confirmin 'em
he sat on his hassock, and lifted his cassock
and slipped his episcopal worm in 'em
Brill - cheers dusk.
Hello Michael,
Happy Valentine's Day greetings to you and your wife!
A charming, good write!
Keep writing
FineB
And to you - thanks FB
upon my very word, how eloquently put & other positive expletives to boot.... Neville
Ah be jeepers - thanks N
tis true..
Michael,
“Suggestively Struck”...indeed!
Love the write and the Mr. Frog!
ribbit...ribbit...ribbit
Happy Valentine’s Day to you and your wife!💞
~Laura~
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