When I am Far

Neville

When I am Far

 

When I am far

Go lay thee down

And tilt

Your tall mirror

Accordingly until

That is

Both you and

Sunlight fit

Then and only then

Mind and when

Your privacy is

Guaranteed mind

Begin to trace

My love

The tiniest of circles 

Round and round

Where you would

Have me

Slow upon slow

At first that is

And oh’ so very perfect

Then faster

As your will dictates

Until

At the very least

My name it does

Escape your lips

And leaves me moist 

Upon your finger tips

Then 

When clothes and quilt

Are rearranged

And smooth again

Let me know

How well I’ve done

Shy not my love nor cry
Enjoy this gift

I pledge to thee

And do repeat as oft

Required

At least until I’m home

And come again mind

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 15th, 2019 03:26
  • Comment from author about the poem: How very touching... & no.. tis sharp sticks that send ya blind.................
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments7

  • orchidee

    I best not ask what's going on there. Someone having fun? If so, I'm glad at least someone is! And is the time going quick, cos it's said 'Time goes quick when ya are enjoying yourself'.

    • Neville

      Fun is fun at any time & time flies like the wind, but remember, fruit flies like bananas... thanks for visiting orchidee..... Neville

      • orchidee

        And now me next poem 'Of fruit flies and fruit cakes!' That'll be right - yes?

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      • Fay Slimm.

        Steeped in poignancy the feel of these words lingers long after the read - another gem of a write dear Neville.

        • Neville

          Thank you my dear friend and true.. warmest wishes winging their way towards Cornwall to you, from me x

        • dusk arising

          Hmmmmm how lovers didst communicate their passion afore the days of telecommunications.
          Wonderful thinly veiled lubrication of the libido from a talented wordsmith.

          • Neville

            you are far to generous and too good for words... keep em coming tho.. cheers DA.. Neville

          • Michael Edwards

            You've done it again
            with your magical pen.

            • Neville

              How wonderful .. what a bloomin nice thing to say sir... am grinning like the proverbial Cheshire cat....

              • Michael Edwards

                My pleasure and well deserved.

              • sylviasearcher

                There is something quite tender about this one.

                • Neville

                  Sssh.. keep it to yourself... or everyone will want some... many big thank you's my evillefriend and poet... N

                  • sylviasearcher

                    Evillefriend? What is one of those?

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                  • Goldfinch60

                    Magical loving words once more Neville.

                    • Neville

                      Thank you kindly sir this very fine mane ....

                    • Suresh

                      You have mastered the art, as your words have so expressed, as she exclaimed your name

                      • Neville

                        How kind you are my friend, many thank you's are on their way, even as I type....... Neville



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