every now and again

dusk arising

she is gone

and somewhere

every now and again

a breeze catches my face

and her song lingers on

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 15th, 2019 04:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: inspired by a marvelous poem published here yesterday by Jon Nakapaulo
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 26
  • Users favorite of this poem: Michael Edwards
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Your words D.A. enrich the theme begun by Jon's poem of yesterday - - a poignant few lines.

    • dusk arising

      Yes he really sparked this one off. Thanks Fay.

    • orchidee

      A fine write dusk.

    • Neville

      wonderful & simply so... that's the best kind of wonderful, I reckon....

      • dusk arising

        Short and sweet. Thank you Neville.

        • Neville

          pleasure's all mine..

        • Michael Edwards

          A little special - into faves.

          • dusk arising

            Gosh i'm amazed to read your comments. Honoured by your selection. Thank you.

          • Goldfinch60

            Those recollections from the past often waken your dreams.

            • dusk arising

              It's amazing how the obscure may trigger such memories. Rarely unpleasant ones tho. Thank you Goldfinch.



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