Incrementally Speaking
Life in instalments
Just a series of moments
Loving by numbers
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Neville (
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Incrementally Speaking
Life in instalments
Just a series of moments
Loving by numbers
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Spot on Neville - among the great shorties - indeed life is just series of happenings which sounds the key to another write - errr sometime..!
thank you Michael I'm having a peculiar day, I must say.....
Sorry to hear culiars are very pec today but hopefully not in a bad way.
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What number are you on now? Lol
I have kinda lost track.. but thanks for keeping me on my toes... ouch....
You invited it!!
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Yes my friend, life adds more to those moments than time - if we are able to discern the numbers of people needing love and try to deliver it by using learnt skills minutes increase in success and achievement - - at least that's what these three short lines mean to me - - incrementally speaking that is.
thank you so much Fay.. I am kinda outa sync with myself today, methinks.. maybe kinda ... 🙂
A fine write N.
thank you kindly sir....
My life of never never
one of carefree deposits
and repossession
Inspired to respond to yours today. Yours though is brill.
I rarely suggest an edit to anyone's work but..... your first two lines on their own are so very strong.
you are indeed most kind, and then some...
Each moment id special, treasure them.
that is precisely what we have to do my friend.... cheers, N
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