SOME EDITITS
Well
Very well
Very deep well
Splash.
Stamp
Don’t stamp
Don’t lick stamp
Self-adhesive.
Rose
He rose
He plucked rose
Ouch.
Point
You point
You sharpen point
Oops.
Bark
Dogs bark
Dogs wet bark
Peeing.
Leaves
Autumn leaves
Autumn soon leaves
winter
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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Comments7
Good ones orchi.
In the Methodist Church there is always food available.
Orchi? I'm swooning lol 🙃
I do apologise Michael, not a good morning, struggling.
Oh lol, good writes M. You can call me Uncle Andy, Brian, Michael, or whatever. All except Auntie Agatha!
Who is Aunty Agatha?
Dunno lol. I said to them - call me anything, within reason. Just don't call me Agatha! lol. Do they call you Mike Berles?
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Dewi Sant to you - bit of French there?!
Wee - err sorry - oui.
Oh so clever these quips and edit-bits Micheal - - - however I have spent several minutes trying to find the meaning of your super-good sketch - - am I not awake yet or what !
Just my odd sense of humour. Choir being interrupted by a pizza delivery - who would order a take-away to be delivered at Church?
Great concept Michael
Freat outcomes
Cheers Andrew
Word play... and played out perfectly... N
Thanks Neville
pleasure ....
Dick
Dick Tator
Dick tator ship
Bismark
Love your play on words, had to have a go.
Love it - some more?
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