SOME EDITITS

Michael Edwards

 

 

 

 

 

SOME EDITITS

 

Well

Very well

Very deep well

Splash.

 

Stamp

Don’t stamp

Don’t lick stamp

Self-adhesive.

 

Rose

He rose

He plucked rose

Ouch.

 

Point

You point

You sharpen point

Oops.

 

Bark

Dogs bark

Dogs wet bark

Peeing.

 

Leaves

Autumn leaves

Autumn soon leaves

winter

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 1st, 2019 01:33
  • Comment from author about the poem: Won't bother explaining this form - I guess it's fairly obvious.
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  • Goldfinch60

    Good ones orchi.

    In the Methodist Church there is always food available.

    • Michael Edwards

      Orchi? I'm swooning lol 🙃

      • Goldfinch60

        I do apologise Michael, not a good morning, struggling.

      • orchidee

        Oh lol, good writes M. You can call me Uncle Andy, Brian, Michael, or whatever. All except Auntie Agatha!

        • Michael Edwards

          Who is Aunty Agatha?

          • orchidee

            Dunno lol. I said to them - call me anything, within reason. Just don't call me Agatha! lol. Do they call you Mike Berles?

            • Michael Edwards

              This reminds me of a trick played on a receptionist where I used to work - she was asked to announce over the tannoy if anyone had seen Mike Hunt - now that's saucy - will Fido bark?

              • orchidee

                Phew! Yes woof woof! Crash! Me falling off me chair. Fido's come to see if I'm OK. I won't ask if anyone had seen Mr Hunt....

              • orchidee

                Dewi Sant to you - bit of French there?!

              • Fay Slimm.

                Oh so clever these quips and edit-bits Micheal - - - however I have spent several minutes trying to find the meaning of your super-good sketch - - am I not awake yet or what !

                • Michael Edwards

                  Just my odd sense of humour. Choir being interrupted by a pizza delivery - who would order a take-away to be delivered at Church?

                • Andrew Charles Forrest

                  Great concept Michael
                  Freat outcomes

                • Neville

                  Word play... and played out perfectly... N

                • dusk arising

                  Dick
                  Dick Tator
                  Dick tator ship
                  Bismark

                  Love your play on words, had to have a go.



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