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OBSCURE SENRYUS
Obscure senryus
frequently making no sense
paediatrician.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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OBSCURE SENRYUS
Obscure senryus
frequently making no sense
paediatrician.
Offline)
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Obscure senryus
Call on the depths of the mind,
Intimidating.
Absolutely love the cartoon, my first laugh of the day, and it was a loud one, thank you Michael.
Pleased you like it - since it was published about 10 years ago I've seen another cartoon along similar lines so I can't say the strap line is 'unique' but it still makes me smile when look at it.
I've seen another cartoon with a similar strap line since this was published some 10 years ago so it's not unique but I still smile when look at it. Thanks Andy.
Oh lol, fine write and pic Michael. Ahh. 'Frequently making no sense' That apply to 99% of us?!
Which is the 1% of me it doesn't apply to?
Your (our) thinking? If that's 1% of us? Oohh, it's dangerous , too much thinking - so some say!
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Isn’t that why we love a senryu!
Made me smile this morning!
Yes indeed - I was thinking of wring several of them - one line which came to me was 'Chickens don't make sand castles' - I don't know why but it just sounds a bit of daftness - how can I use it?
Wallpaper fading
Sun rays through open windows
Chickens don't make sand castles.
Perhaps 'Please don't bang on the saucepan' would work better - think I ought to go back to bed!
Beautiful, yet there is a part of me that can even find something in the obscure!
You should do a fusion of obscure senryus 😊
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GOOD MORNING MIKE (10:30 pm here !)
Love the SISTINE very PRISTINE !
Paediatrics was always obscure to me : Lack of provenance !
Blessings & Love : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Thanks Angela - sleep well
love M
Great pic great 575 again thnaks Mchael
Cheers Andrew
Sez a lot about a fella does his senryu’s... nice one sir.... Neville
Obscure - yes - and as for my wotsits I guess you're right
Ha ha ha - couldnt get past the laugh at that wry humour of your wonderful sketch today Michael - will try to catch up with the Sens later...........
Do have a go Fay -
Get your pen out Fay
try to do a senryu
crumpets on cows horns.
The inspiration for this fine write came from The Cow and Crumpet - a local hostelry where I sup and ponder.
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Fido's obscure too - imaginary. Aww! You had any fights with Bram Berles lately?
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