The Vltava.

Goldfinch60



They spring from the mountainside,

Two separate lives that become one,

The river of life is formed.

Flowing through woods and hills,

Flowing through meadows,

Where natures greenery salutes,

Salutes the life giving power

Of this magnificent waterway.

It flows into the night

And the moonshine reflects its wonder

As it allows the mermaids to dance,

To dance in its flowing majesty.

It goes on towards the sea,

The sea of life where we all meet

As our journey continues,

Continues for eternity.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 2nd, 2019 01:49
  • Comment from author about the poem: Bedrich Smetana's 195th birthday is today 2nd March 2019.
  • Category: Special occasion
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  • orchidee

    A lovely write and pic Gold. Who's that composer I should never listen to? Who should be banished - as you've said?! I forgot. Tell me, so I will remember not to tune in to him.

    • Goldfinch60

      Sir Thomas Beecham, when asked if he had played any Stockhausen replied " No but I have often trod in some!"

      • orchidee

        Ahh, that's the guy! Stock-wotsit.

      • Michael Edwards

        I've always loved the Smetana work and the river is magnificent - I recall going on a trip on it. Great write as always Andy.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Michael, what a treat to have gone down that river.

          • Michael Edwards

            It was only a day trip but still quite an experience.

          • Andrew Charles Forrest

            Greta write G have never seen it but it looks like heaven and you did it justice

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Andrew. I too have never seen it but I have heard the music many times.

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              WOW UNCLE ANDY : You are waxing very Lyrical today ! Love the Smetna & the Video : Awesome ! Sorry your weather has turned cooler & wetter ! Perfect for sailing here (NZ) today Warm 24C (75F) and sunney ALL DAY !
              Love the Poem : Flowing & Dancing Mermaids and ending in the Sea of Life for Eternity : AMEN !
              Blessings & Love for YOU & JOYCE :
              ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
              Please check "OUR PLANET EARTH"

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Angela.

                Cooler always suits me once the temperature starts creeping into the teens I start complaining.

              • Neville

                magnificence encapsulated within a moments read.... less of a tributary and more of a fine tribute... N

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Neville, so kind.

                  • Neville

                    ........................... my pleasure entirely Neville



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