In a Room

sylviasearcher

There’s a room
Four walls waiting
Me
You

There’s a time
No clocks tormenting
Yours
Mine

There’s a wild sea
Between us
You
Me

But beneath the mighty waves
And the conjurer’s moon
Out beyond what mortal lovers seek
There’s a room

There’s a place
A time for grace

There’s a room
Four walls waiting
Me
You

There’s a room
I always waited
Speak me now
Some Truth

  • Author: sylviasearcher (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 3rd, 2019 11:30
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments5

  • Michael Edwards

    Enigmatic (at least in my book) and as such an intriguing read - Love your style - love your poem.

    • sylviasearcher

      Thanks Michael, this one really was a two minute jotting after a conversation with an old friend.

      He’d tell you I write a poem for every word that he utters!

    • dusk arising

      Your words reminded me very much of an affair i had with a lady in a chat room who lived across the ocean.
      I wrote of a room and an ocean.

      You create a desire to romance your words and create an adventure of love..... fascinating writing.

      • sylviasearcher

        I guess in my imagination love has always been an adventure,

        That’s a lovely comment, a desire to romance my words!

        Thanks 😊

      • Goldfinch60

        Very intriguing write that pulls me right in to it.

        • sylviasearcher

          Come into my room lol!

          Thanks for being intrigued, I think I’m almost feeling like my poems aren’t bad at all!

          • Goldfinch60

            No, they are all good. As FineB says - Keep writing.

          • 1 more comment

          • Fay Slimm.

            Oh I love this romantic invite dear Sylvia - I can relate to each line.

          • Neville

            I dont know how or why I came to miss these words when first posted... at least I found them now.. and much enjoyed they are too..... Neville

            • sylviasearcher

              Thanks Neville, they weren’t that long ago but feel like a while.

              Glad you enjoyed them.

              • Neville

                I did and true...



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