Freedom now and ever after
Hope lingered but briefly, chapter by chapter
Too long, kept on in secrecy
Come fast the time. Unchained to be
Strange Spectators shriek and shudder
But not a word could ever utter
No words now, no lips could pass
To change the leap that was too vast
Freedom now and ever after
Unto a world promised peace would capture
Enveloped by soft river’s landing
Alone at last, existence expanding
Far away now from those who never know
That which leaping lady dare not show
Or perhaps free from world’s complicit collusion
The ancient masterpiece. Human illusion!
Waters greet with gushing grace
The lonely lady who lost her face
And found it flowing through a dream
But all they hear. Her haunting scream.
- Author: sylviasearcher ( Offline)
- Published: March 6th, 2019 02:32
- Comment from author about the poem: Needs polishing ...
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments2
May your dreams flow in beauty and wonder as do your words.
Thanks Goldfinch. These words follow a scene in my book.
Well crafted and darkly so with hauntingly sinister overtones and chilling undercurrents ... contemporary yet with a classical flavour and feel...... Neville
Perhaps not in like when in the awakening the protagonist drowns herself at sea?
I have not seen the movie, so am not sure.... N
Is it a movie?
Kate Chopin
The awakening?
It’s definateky a book
Oh' silly me... no never read but maybe I will ..
‘The voice of the sea is seductive, never ceasing, whispering, clamoring, murmuring, inviting the soul to wander in abysses of solitude.’
It may be a film also. I just wasn’t sure.
I can hear her calling each day from my study... well very nearly...
You hear the calling described above?
The abysses of solitude?
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