Ardour.
To a shy beau.
Try love's seduction and become replete.
I treat with lushness.
My skill overflows.
Mere tokens of passion are all but deceit.
I relax shyness.
My real ardour shows.
Romantic potions raise mere paltry desire.
I apply moreness.
My wine maketh man.
Taste lips of abundance, discover my fire.
Uncap and tap me.
Then escape if you can !
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: March 7th, 2019 03:10
- Comment from author about the poem: The pose at a window brought seduction to mind - hence the Lady's bold invitation. Hope you enjoy.
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Comments8
Now, should I try some of this! Should I meet her? Anything to with 'ardour', and my 'watchdog' Fido barks, to warn me off. I'll put him in the shed a while, and let me hair down. What Fido don't see won't hurt him! heehee.
Yes letting your hair down Orchi means you take up the invitation from that bold maiden.... oooh - better keep Fido in that shed for a while methinks.
WOW FAY ~ Some libido risng ardour. Love the Picture ~ Love the Poem and the simile to fine wine ! Thanks for sharing ~
Love through Lyrics ~
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Please taste Angela's ~ NZ Lamb & Claret !
Glad you liked the wine simile in this poem on ardour my friends- - the picture incited me but I put the blame on our early Spring !!!
I'm dong an Orchi - I'm swooning. fine seductive write dear Fay
Awe - -now when I read of you swooning tis time to think up a new subject my friend - - tomorrow I may post something a bit cooler !!! .............. thanks a lot for your in-put dear Michael.
Pon my very word our cups they do runneth over this fine mane and true.. us lucky lusty lads are in for a treat methinks and our thirsts be quenched by lithesome buxom wenched..... forgive the ed....
Another perfectly poemed post Fay.. a real good un and a keeper for sure.. Neville x
This gave me a giggle to write and I guessed your cup would be overflowing with such a bold invite my fun-loving friend - -- ha ha - - so pleased you too are not swooning however - - must be the early Spring weather promoted it says she with a laugh - tomorrow's will be colder by half !! - - but thanks Nev very muchly for saving to savour again in your keepers.
Very seductive and captivating!
Really enjoyed this Faye
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Am so glad you found the read captivating dear Jayde - -- my thanks for your visit and comment.
My word, what beast lurks within?
Do not go gentle through that dark window dusk, rage, rage against the .... no, hang on a minute.... it actually sounds like fun..... but what commitment is sought?
Hope no beast works within that Lady's bold invite - your Dylanesque quote made me laugh D.A. -- I love the conversational way you think aloud in your comments my friend - -- so pleased you vote it a fun-write as I intended.................. thanks a lot my friend. for your continued encouragement .
Lusty and bawdy, like rolling in the clover. Oooooh....such anti Victorian behavior. I'm sure it all happened behind closed doors. Perhaps, they were locked and he could not escape.
A lovely poem with a taste of fiery passion. I like the form of it .She goes from unveiling her powers, to a plea for satisfaction I'm sure this made everyone's day. Really good stuff. - Phil A.
Beautiful seductive write Fay, ardour unleashed.
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