Prolet

Neville

Prolet

 

You may well call it Spring

Here in my head though

I can not find

Despite the very love of trying 

I assure you

The perfect word 

For so much beauty and the

Newness of it blinding.....

 

You may call it Spring

Here in my heart though

There is a certain freedom

timeless....

Though I would gladly share

and truly so

This place and time

This transient now and here

Which we call Prolet....

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 7th, 2019 05:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: Prolet is how we say Spring in Bulgaria....
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 45
  • Users favorite of this poem: Poetic Dan
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  • orchidee

    A fine write. Glad ya told me that N! If I hadn't have known, I would have thought Prolet was a Property Service Agency - really exists - based on pro-let?

    • Neville

      dunno, maybe but thanks for the unescorted viewing nevertheless...

      • orchidee

        Glad to oblige with TUI for you - 'Today's useless Information' from me!

        • Neville

          cheers orchidee..

        • Fay Slimm.

          Inspirational my friend to say the least. - -this revered tribute to something called Spring - - or be it Prolet - tis versed to perfection in this special invite to stay with the beauty of here and now.

          • Neville

            Am very near lost for words Fay... many thanks indeed for such a kind and encouraging response ..... Neville

          • Michael Edwards

            Really lifts you - fine read Neville.

            • Neville

              Blagodarya moi priatel ..... undoubtedly spelt incorrectly but I'm sure ya get the message... Cheers/Nastrave.... Neville

              • Michael Edwards

                Not sure but I have an on-line artist friend who is Bulgarian and lives in a village some distance from Sofia - I'd best ask him!

                • Neville

                  I am in Sofia next week for a couple of days before driving to our place in the Starra Planina Mountains..

                  • Michael Edwards

                    I've never been to Bulgaria so I am quite envious - it's somewhere on our list to visit. Our place is in Cyprus but we've passed it on to our son whose wife now manages it - takes the weight off my shoulders and we have been there so many times over the years that if he hadn't taken it on we would be looking to sell it. Best of both worlds really as we still have it if we decide to go again - the keys are hanging in the cupboard. Mind you it is let out and there are hardly any vacancies left for this year.

                    • Neville

                      I like Cyprus too.. we have never let our place out.. if you go to Bulgaria, try to avoid the touristy sea side places.. I take it you are over 20.....

                    • JaydeVictoria

                      A wonderful write as always, thoroughly enjoyed Neville

                      • Neville

                        and you my friend are far to kind... but I do thank you for it... Neville

                      • Poetic Dan

                        I'm currently working with a rescue German Shepherd and today he gave me a lot of jip trying to rush me out the door! I will admit I couldn't blame him.... Spring is here!

                        • Neville

                          Hey Dan my man.... of course ya can't blame him.... get out there and enjoy and many thanks are on their way to join ya.... N

                          • Poetic Dan

                            Forgot to add he 8 years old from Romania, was going to be sent back because of his attitude but really he's just misunderstood like the rest.
                            Lucky my attitude is far worse πŸ˜‰

                            • Neville

                              Aw Bless him, try and work your magic on him... πŸ™‚

                            • dusk arising

                              And i though a prolet was something the NHS operated on.
                              A fitting tribute to this rebirth time of year.

                              • Neville

                                Thank you my friend..

                              • sylviasearcher

                                I used to get excited at the first sight of little green buds on trees.

                                I used to wonder who else noticed them and felt the same funny little joy.

                                It used to remind me of renewal and hope and beauty and wonder. Of Mother Nature and her endless rhythms and endurance, painting her beauty across the seasons, in spite of the state of the world.

                                Some how I just can’t feel it right now, but I tried and I felt a little bit sad for the loss of it.

                              • Neville

                                I feel that I should write something profound, like how these words have let you down.. but I know it has nothing to do with these words

                                I would like to say things will improve and you will fell joy again and pleasure etc

                                However, I know that I can only hope such things.... And true...

                              • Goldfinch60

                                Very good write Neville.

                                • Neville

                                  Thank you Goldfinch60 appreciated, you are..... N

                                • Fay Slimm.

                                  A tribute to Prolet re-read and enjoyed quite as much as first rime around -- good to see your name back in circulation today and hope all goes well with your Bulgarina break Nev. - - x Fay

                                • Neville

                                  Thank you my friend, just a fleeting visit while internet is working, will be back in a couple of days.. hope you are well x

                                  • Fay Slimm.

                                    Yes am good thank you - - Spring is here with a vengeance and oh the lovely flowers are embroidering our milder countryside so prolifically - - hope to hear about the beauty of Bulgarian Spring from your pen soon - looking forward to having you back. -- x Fay

                                    • Neville

                                      Hello dear Fay.. not long been back. hope you are well my friend... and you spoil me with two visits... N

                                      • Fay Slimm.

                                        So good and warms my heart to know you are back again Nev- - your readers have missed you - and do hope you found all was well at your mountain retreat - -- saw how quite a few times you were trying to get onto the poetry site but access kept fading - -- - hope the weather treated you well though - - been good here and Spring is showing her beauty again - - so sweet welcome to MPS mon ami. - - - - Fay x

                                        • Neville

                                          Oh' what a welcome back my friend, thank you so much.. Once the bills were paid everything was near perfect.. did a lot of travelling by train and coach tho which is unusual as I usually have my own car but sold it last year.. Yes.. I swore very loudly on quite a number of occasions when trying to post something.... N x



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