FineB

The Wind

The wind doth blows,

Trees and branches violently quake,

Waters in the river with great fury ripple,

The dog struggles to balance as with the wind he doth shake.

Nature struggles against the elements,

Debris and litter fly everywhere, a spectacle of windswept scenes,

Climatic chaos descends upon us,

Fragments remain of an old derelict building blown to smithereens.

Comments8

  • orchidee

    A good write FineB.

    • FineB

      Hi Orchidee,

      Thank you.

      You are welcome!

      Keep writing FineB!

    • Fay Slimm.

      A scary view of what climate change means - thanks for sharing it FineB

      • FineB

        Hi Fay,

        You're welcome.

        Thanks for reading.

        Keep writing FineB!

      • Neville

        I think you captured the moment exceedingly well....

        they are becoming more frequent visits around my neck of the woods too.............. Neville

        • FineB

          Hello Neville,

          Many thanks.

          Its still blowing hard the wind out there.

          Keep writing FineB!

          • Neville

            pleasures mine my friend... N

          • Michael Edwards

            A poignant write indeed.

            • FineB

              Hello Michael,

              Thanks.

              Be careful of the wind out there.

              Keep writing FineB.

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              GOOD EVENING FINE ~ A great Poem to remind us of the Powers of Nature ~ one of which is WIND. Increased global warming etc as a result of Mans activity results in more extreme climates Worldwide ! We are all paying a price for those who cause Global Warming ~ALL OF US ! And those who deny it like Mister TRUMP ! Thanks for sharing ~ my cardoors were nearly blown off today in Essex !
              Blessings through Poetry
              BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡

              • FineB

                Hello Brian and Angela,

                Many thanks

                Blessings in poetry to you both.

                Keep writing FineB!

              • Goldfinch60

                Good one FineB, yes it has been a bit breezy.

                • FineB

                  Hello Goldfinch60.

                  Thank you.

                  It certainly was breezy yesterday.

                  The wind is agreeable and a lot calmer today..

                  Keep writing FineB.

                • Poetic Dan

                  Glad it's calmed down now but wonderful work

                • Suresh

                  Wind, another element of nature.
                  In fury it is extremely destructive.
                  If gentle it's a breeze that carries the dark clouds where needed most.

                  Fine read



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