FineB

The Wind

The wind doth blows,

Trees and branches violently quake,

Waters in the river with great fury ripple,

The dog struggles to balance as with the wind he doth shake.

Nature struggles against the elements,

Debris and litter fly everywhere, a spectacle of windswept scenes,

Climatic chaos descends upon us,

Fragments remain of an old derelict building blown to smithereens.

Comments9

  • orchidee

    A good write FineB.

    • FineB

      Hi Orchidee,

      Thank you.

      You are welcome!

      Keep writing FineB!

    • Fay Slimm

      A scary view of what climate change means - thanks for sharing it FineB

      • FineB

        Hi Fay,

        You're welcome.

        Thanks for reading.

        Keep writing FineB!

      • LittleGift

        Good piece, our planet needs us to care for it much better than we are doing

        • FineB

          Hi Little Gift,

          Thanks for reading.

          The natural world is paying for man's sins in tampering with the atmosphere .

          Keep writing FineB!

        • Neville

          I think you captured the moment exceedingly well....

          they are becoming more frequent visits around my neck of the woods too.............. Neville

          • FineB

            Hello Neville,

            Many thanks.

            Its still blowing hard the wind out there.

            Keep writing FineB!

            • Neville

              pleasures mine my friend... N

            • Michael Edwards

              A poignant write indeed.

              • FineB

                Hello Michael,

                Thanks.

                Be careful of the wind out there.

                Keep writing FineB.

              • ANGELA & BRIAN

                GOOD EVENING FINE ~ A great Poem to remind us of the Powers of Nature ~ one of which is WIND. Increased global warming etc as a result of Mans activity results in more extreme climates Worldwide ! We are all paying a price for those who cause Global Warming ~ALL OF US ! And those who deny it like Mister TRUMP ! Thanks for sharing ~ my cardoors were nearly blown off today in Essex !
                Blessings through Poetry
                BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡

                • FineB

                  Hello Brian and Angela,

                  Many thanks

                  Blessings in poetry to you both.

                  Keep writing FineB!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Good one FineB, yes it has been a bit breezy.

                  • FineB

                    Hello Goldfinch60.

                    Thank you.

                    It certainly was breezy yesterday.

                    The wind is agreeable and a lot calmer today..

                    Keep writing FineB.

                  • Poetic Dan

                    Glad it's calmed down now but wonderful work

                  • Suresh

                    Wind, another element of nature.
                    In fury it is extremely destructive.
                    If gentle it's a breeze that carries the dark clouds where needed most.

                    Fine read



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