Clickety Click.

Goldfinch60



Clickety-click,

Another year has passed.

Another year in your life

Where ups and downs lead you,

Lead you to a path of experience,

Where you become more at peace,

At peace with the love in your life,

That love of those around you

Showing their joy

In you reaching another year,

Another milestone,

Clickety-click.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 11th, 2019 02:17
  • Comment from author about the poem: One of my friends had her sixty sixth birthday so I wrote this for her. In the game of bingo Clickety-click means sixty six.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 18
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold. Eek, another year notched up. Oh lol - what about 10-66 too?! Did you go to that freezing anniversary thingy? I didn't.

    • Michael Edwards

      Oh yes you did Orchi - I saw you in the drinks tent.

      • orchidee

        Thanks M. The freezing one was to remember 40 martyrs who froze to death one night in 320AD in Armenia. I must have been at the anniversary in me hat and coat, and all wrapped up. The drinks turned to ice lollies. Was I the one in the true story who opted out, went for hot bath, but perished from the shock of change of temperature? Or was you that one? It's worse - some 18+ details (woof!). Some were alive still in the morning, but still chucked on the bonfire. Man's inhumanity to man for having a faith.

      • dusk arising

        Nice one Goldfinch, you have to keep these youngsters happy!

        Six and two, clikkety duck, sixty two.

        • Goldfinch60

          Of course you need to keep them happy and out of mischief.

        • Michael Edwards

          Nice one Andy. I remember my clickety click - that was Theresa's Den years ago now.

          • Goldfinch60

            I was still recovering from my 65th.

          • dusk arising

            Nice one Goldfinch, you have to keep these youngsters happy!

            Six and two, clikkety duck, sixty two.

            • Goldfinch60

              It’s good to peak to the youngsters like you, it keeps me young.

            • JaydeVictoria

              Nice write Goldfinch and a very true one at that 🙂

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Jayde, most kind.

              • Neville

                That's the way it goes innit.. blink and another candle burning.. nice little moment captured... great tune too.. and the first guitar rift I ever learnt.... Neville

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thanks Neville.

                  As I just said to LittleGift is someting so special.

                  • Neville

                    yep so bloomin true...



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