I write about
The things I want
But you're all that comes to mind
.t.b.
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Author:
tb (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: After a breakup I was writing poetry and it all was inspired by someone I was too blind to see the bad in.
- Category: Love
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WELCOME FRIEND Thanks for your first Poem ~ short but bitter-sweet ! Sometimes when we escape from a bad relationship it continues to haunt our minds and fill our thoughts ! Im 35 now so one does recover. I share this site with Angela my Fiancee (30) we hope to be married @ Easter 2020. Blessings thanks for sharing ~ Please check our site ~ Yours BRIAN. You will find MPS a very empathetic site. It works by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ and building up a cohort of MPS Friends ~ OK.
How true these few words can be when blind love guides.
Welcome to MPS with this short but oh so poignant a write - - I look forward to reading more of your work.
a little gem.. the first of many.. I hope.. Neville
Short and punchy does the trick every time. Why write twenty lines when you can say more in three... just as you do here.
A bad person as a lover can do us a lot of good in the end.... wisdom follows.
Excellent entry, ... more please.
Very meaningful write.
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