I write about

The things I want

But you're all that comes to mind


  • Author: tb (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 11th, 2019 08:48
  • Comment from author about the poem: After a breakup I was writing poetry and it all was inspired by someone I was too blind to see the bad in.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 24
  • User favorite of this poem: Writings From The Unknown13.



    WELCOME FRIEND Thanks for your first Poem ~ short but bitter-sweet ! Sometimes when we escape from a bad relationship it continues to haunt our minds and fill our thoughts ! Im 35 now so one does recover. I share this site with Angela my Fiancee (30) we hope to be married @ Easter 2020. Blessings thanks for sharing ~ Please check our site ~ Yours BRIAN. You will find MPS a very empathetic site. It works by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ and building up a cohort of MPS Friends ~ OK.

  • Fay Slimm.

    How true these few words can be when blind love guides.

  • Fay Slimm.

    Welcome to MPS with this short but oh so poignant a write - - I look forward to reading more of your work.

  • Neville

    a little gem.. the first of many.. I hope.. Neville

  • dusk arising

    Short and punchy does the trick every time. Why write twenty lines when you can say more in three... just as you do here.
    A bad person as a lover can do us a lot of good in the end.... wisdom follows.

    Excellent entry, ... more please.

  • Goldfinch60

    Very meaningful write.
    Welcome to MPS.

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