Let's Go.
When sun sets nectar's spread
against the lure of dark sky,
to desire's ripened readiness
oh let's go, you and I.
Where moon meets sea's caress
in clandestine dunes of night
to delight's coverted pleasure
oh let's go, you and I.
With that magic stars possess
love's alchemy shall unite
so, to conjure togetherness
oh let's go, you and I.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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A fine write Fay.
Many thanks Orchi.
this is a delightful poem Fay one that sits beautifully on its very own page, whispering soft... and I am sure it is not only my heart that tis a fluttering this very windy March mane.... Neville
Hearts of the incurable romantic should flutter after digesting these words so it comes at no great surprise to read your lovely comment my dear friend.
my very sincere pleasure & true .... N x
You captured magic like I used to believe in 🌈
Magic is in the air when love is around - hope you will find it again my friend. - am glad you think I caught it a bit though in this little posting..
I've got the tickets - let's go - fine write.
Bags at the ready and tickets awaiting - - a lady has only to make the choice of where and when - - ha - - a big thank you for going along with the romantic mood of the poem my friend.
Ooooooo FAY you can be so romantic at times it makes a Lady blush. Its MORNING here (10:30 am Wednesday) but I just spoke to Brian on Skype so it was Evening Blues for Him as we are so so far apart PHYSICALLY but ROMANTICALLY we are in each others arms 24/7 and we WILL be "Together Again" @ Easter ! On SKYPE where we can see but not touch : We often say "O lets fly away : just you and I" and thats when the distance (11,500 miles ~ Wish I gone to Andalucia !) hits hard ! Still @ Easter we will have two weeks in a (BIG) Camper Van together ~ AMEN
I have an afternoon & Evening clinic today so catching up on MPS !
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Love the visual very Romantic !
I like this a lot. The usage of syllables and scheme go well with each other. It's just like the timing is really good with the speed it's meant to be read. Nice one.
Wonderful write once again Fay, may your togetherness never fail.
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