No umbrella

Poetic Dan

Everything is bothering me!
Waiting five minutes
Having to wake up
Dogs following

 

Nothing feels right
Holding back the light
This isn't what's inside

 

Every moment that goes by
A clean slate if I decide?

 

Instead I choose to fester
Drenched with no umbrella

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 15th, 2019 10:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: I can't wait to share my good news, once I stop this insane mood!
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sylviasearcher

    Do you have some good news?
    Choosing to fester... I know that feeling.
    It’s choosing when to rest and when to fight?
    Biding your time.
    Until you fly!

    • Poetic Dan

      What an awesome way to end your rhyme, I've done it before but I feel like dumbo and just keep tripping over.

      Yes I do but waiting for the right words to flow in our maybe just a better vibration

    • orchidee

      You got that brolly yet?! lol.

      • Poetic Dan

        Yep, it got blown right througt

      • Michael Edwards

        Oooh - fester not - the worlds your oyster (actually there's not much room in an oyster).

        • Poetic Dan

          Not if I was the size of a "who" there would be enough room for me and all of you!

          Always appreciate the comment and hope you know the Horton hears a who story 😉

        • Nicholas Browning

          A strange piece of multiple questions: "To fight or run", "To try and fail?", "To become clean if I make the choice?". I like this a lot, Dan.

          • Poetic Dan

            Much appreciated, thank you for the wording. Has given me more to ponder!

          • Goldfinch60

            The good hews is there for you Dan, let the light go.

            • Poetic Dan

              Thank you Good sir

            • orchidee

              Ah yes, umbrella not much use in gales. We need hoods, but even they can blow down. I'm gonna be 'hoodie'! lol.

              • Poetic Dan

                O if you do that it's a must that you put some trousers on that are only staying up because of your strut!
                Ya my G... He he



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