I've kept it down for so long
It's not sure how to come up
As if my emotions are in overload.
So many poems have been and gone
Like the others lights that are no more
The first trimester has now past
I've seen your head and arms
September brings another star
Awaiting two big bros and a sister
A mother that will ground you for the rest of your day's
With a farther that will keep the wind under your wings
I've stepped into paradise
Waiting to meet you here
Nothing in need of fixing
Loving each smile & tear
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
Offline) - Published: March 16th, 2019 03:11
- Comment from author about the poem: After two miscarriages last year this was our final attempt, I saw the pink line 8 weeks ago and we have been on a roller-coaster of emotions but now l'm going to embrace this gift with all the fire that burns in my soul. I was made for this!
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Well hey, what a nice story to hear. Glad you guys pulled through, Dan.
Congrats, and best of luck being a father!
Thank you a story I never thought I would tell or should I say so proud to share.
Much appreciated
Really touched by this - good on yer Dan.
Glad to share the light of good news! Have a great day
Congratulations! You show such strength and resilience and hope in all your poems!
That I am always honoured to know, even now I think of the many times I'm not but within a reflection of all of you I find and see my strength.
Thank you
Best of warm wishes Dan - - I love that last stanza - -so good to know things are turning out well and the future is bright.
Yeah, always happens like that then I think of deleting the rest but I did get goosebumps on it!
My future is as bright as I decide hopefully I'll leave the negative where they always are and ride this positive wave... For the rest of my days.
Thank you for listening to my life, always appreciate your light!
A lovely write Dan. Not fantasy like Emmerdale, where half of them are past it, but say they're expecting! Miraculous! Doh!
Thank you, yeah I can still run around a park but probably half way through my show
Oh you lucky people! Great time of life for you both..... ahead are sleepless nights and puke stained clothes.... and the most marvellous days of your life.
With dirty bums and lots of hormones but in being better and balancing out 😉
Thank you buddy, much appreciated
Beautiful write about a wonderful time, may you all be blessed.
Thank you very much good sir, its taken a while to remind myself I am!
Dan,
Once again CONGRATULATIONS!
One of your best poems ever! Your September star will be welcomed by the greatest dad, mom, brothers and sister! A bright future for one and all! Thank you for sharing this wonderful news. Blessings to you and your family!
~Laura~
22nd View and it was you
I'm up at 3am with a bit of pain
Your words are so healing
Thank you kindly again
I do show up when you least expect me!
So sorry you’re in pain! Just think of that star that you shall be welcoming soon! It’ll be all worth it!🤗
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