Body m.o.t

Poetic Dan

Today they'll cut the rest out
I sit and wait to see if that's enough
If not then more will be done
Another needle up the nose

 

It's such a sensitive place
Little holes on your face
Glad I never will again
Roll up notes sniffing away

 

The cause is never really known
They tell me it came from the sun
But they don't know my life
Those details have no time

 

So they're fixing me like a m.o.t
Once I'm healed it will be up to me
To stop internal suffering
Letting it all be what will be

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 19th, 2019 06:08
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Comments6

  • Fay Slimm.

    A haunt ot a read Dan - here's ho;ping those holes mend soon with lessons learnt - - - hugs meanwhile to you for this honest posting.

    • Poetic Dan

      I'm home and all stitched up, feeling a bit sorry for myself. Definitely appreciate the hug!

    • orchidee

      Yes, best wishes Dan! Meanwhile a severe pothole has been mended in a road. I dreaded it when the bus would turn into that road, giving a massive bump as we passed the hole.

      • Poetic Dan

        Happy days then, a smooth ride for us both from now on. Appreciate the wishes
        Much respect and love

      • Nicholas Browning

        Que sera sera.
        You're a brave man, Dan.
        Best regards in your endeavors, and I wish you the best.

        • Poetic Dan

          Thank you Good sir

        • Goldfinch60

          May your life be forever on the mend Dan, all is going well.

          • Poetic Dan

            I hope so, once this pain goes away. Thank you my friend

          • Michael Edwards

            Hoping you have a full recovery - my thoughts are with you. And a great read...

            • Poetic Dan

              Always appreciated good sir!

            • Laura🌻

              Dan,

              Now I understand why you’re hurting! Wishing you a speedy recovery with as little pain as possible! I know it’s easier said than done! You’re strong! Your strength and positive thoughts will overshadow the pain! Hang in there and stay strong! We’re with you all the way! 🤗

              • Poetic Dan

                Like a blister along the way, have your self a fantastic day!



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