Recollections
I made no attempt
To tidy up
The dining room
Last night
Before retiring
Nor did I check
For messages or mail
But that did not stop me
Thinking I want
To punish you
And for a moment
To withhold the pain
You so much crave
Maybe it was
Just as well
I lost your number
Somewhere between
The kitchen and the shower
Although I still recall
How much
I wanted you
Until that stranger
Took you
Somewhere off
The French coast
When you were far
Too good for words
Yet retained your
Appetite for poetry…
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Author:
Neville (
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Strong recollections of unpleasant happenings and hopefully not from experience Nev. -- a compelling read that pulls at heartstrings.
I have said it before but am gonna say it again.. Bless ya Fay and true....
Why did I have to come along and muck it all up?! Hint: Bonjour! (bit of French there). heehee.
I suspect you have an overwhelming compulsion..
Or I turned up and you knew it was me by the 'Ccooeeeeeee!' and you thought 'Oh no!'
Better bring Fido in from the back yard, he's got some work to do!
not a bad idea...
You recollected that I was about to sing outdoors, then ran indoors pronto?!
you are very astute aint ya
You indoors now?
yes
Phew! Meeeoowwoooo! Ya hear me?!
An intriguing write, I wondered if it was very clever, I wasn’t sure if I should feel sorry.
To withhold the pain
You so much crave
There was a kind of ache to it and I couldn’t work out whose.
am glad you may have liked it... and just wanna thank you.. N
Oh yes I liked it, and thank you 😊
tis but a pleasure 🙂
Very well expressed
How very bloomin kind....
So you're back - and with a great write that carried me along with it.
Thank you Michael, yes.. am back and exhausted... Neville
Like a dark mysterious stranger in an alleyway back in the 1940's. A good read sir.
Thank you Nicholas.. now that is an interesting perspective... a most welcome visit to be sure... N
You story teller you.... you man of the half told mystery leaving us, appetite whetted, craving more!
Loved this today.... wheres the book? Don't leave it too late or you'll be too old to enjoy the royalties.
Cheers DA.. many thank you's sir........ N
Good story told in a wonderful way, may that appetite for poetry be forever with us all.
I have a hunger for it and thank you my friend...
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