Her Beautiful Smile - Senryu.

Goldfinch60



Her beautiful smile

Lit up the world around her,

But from a distance.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 25th, 2019 02:30
  • Comment from author about the poem: A senryu that just came to me.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 23
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  • orchidee

    A lovely senryu Gold. Was she grinning like a Cheshire cat?

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi, yes she walked away and the smile remained.

    • Nicholas Browning

      The Samurai are at it again!
      A lovely little piece Finch.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Nicholas, yes they have their swords out once more.

      • Michael Edwards

        Nice one Andy

      • Neville

        nowt like a perfect senryu to open up a new day with ... ta GF60

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Neville, my absolute pleasure.

        • Fay Slimm.

          A world of meaning in these three lines dear Goldy - thanks for sharing.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Fay, much appreciated.



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