A very clean house
With everything in its place
Broken computer.
Keep the dream alive
Ignore all reality
Hit the snooze button.
I enjoy team work
Always together as one
Avoiding the blame
-
Author:
Michael Edwards (
Offline) - Published: March 27th, 2019 00:57
- Comment from author about the poem: Sorry I wasn't around yesterday - got called away.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 25
- Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻, Sunshinefalling
Offline)
Comments9
I can relate to all of those Michael.
The new art form is very good Michael, I am seeing more and more within them.
This is the last of the current batch - I have in mind calling it 'Spring' as it reminds me of spring rising from the ground and the emerging green. Thanks Andy.
Good writes and pic Michael. You ran out of credit cards to chop up?!
Run out of chops. We usually buy a large pork tenderloin joint and cut it up to make two smaller joints (there's only two of us) and at least four chops for during the week. Works out so much cheaper but need to keep my knives sharp.
They're the stuff my grins are made of and thats for sure.
Pleased about that - you can't beat a few grinifications can you! Thanks dusk.
Grins all over me face after reading these fun 575s - - -you have a great sense of humour my friend.
I'd be lost without it - I'm one of natures true gigglers which can often be quite embarrassing. Thanks Fay.
What's unseen at first, comes into focus with concentration - applies to all in life.
Thnx
It does indeed - cheers Suresh.
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Finished teaching @ 4pm (importance of VITAMINS with Caterers) so thought Id catch up on MPS ! Love the VISUAL ~ my Title ~ "Ripples that I find in recesses of my MIND" or is it a CARDIOGRAPH after running ? ! Love the SENRYU I have titled them ~ Priorities : Choices : Delegation ~ Good title for a BOOK on EFFECTIVE MANAGEMENT.
Blessings & Joy
Yours BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check todays POEM ~ Thanks
Great titles and I can see the cardiograph reference - thanks so muchly Angela
Indeed a very relateable trilogy.... N
Pleased you like my trilogisations - hard to get your tongue round that - good job it's not a real word. Cheers Neville.
repeated use of neologisms can get ya locked up Michael.... just sayin... N
I've always been a bit of a neologisticator (should that be 'er'?)
Hate 'or' in adviser - I'm British.
to er is to be human... maybe.. I am English...
Three very fine and humorous poems. My favorite is the first. It's so true.The
artwork is brilliant, especially the coloring. For some unknown reason I see it as blues music wafting through the air, and being resisted by nature. Loved it and all of the poems. - Phil A.
Thanks Phil - or something like relaxed jazz - George Shearing maybe.
Michael,
I enjoyed your 575s!
Love the artwork! I might have to add this one to my list along with the others! If you keep this up, I might have to secure some wall space at an art gallery to showcase them!
~Laura~
You're so kind - this is the last of the current batch but I will be taking some workshops later in the year so there will be more but not for some time. Tomorrow I'll start posting some small charcoal sketches which will be mounted in black frames with the idea that they be hung in sets of 4.
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.