Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
Heart
Forever keeping
Time and marking
Moments
There she sits
Left off centre
That portion of
Herself
She Fears no man
Will ever want
Yet all men crave
Nestled somewhere
Deep within and
Protected on all her
Sides by a somewhat
Softer inner core
Then surrounded
By her much harder
Outer shell
Yes there it lies
And lays beating
Waiting to be loved
No less impressed
Tho solemnly addressed
Anticipating a sudden
Surprise caress perchance
Her heart beats
All a gentle flutter
Like the outstretched
Wings of a
Fledgling sunbittern
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Neville (
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Should I meet her? Or have you met her already?!
I gave her your number, either she, a friend or the police should be round later....cheers N
Ohhh, there goes me door-bell. Bet it's her......
What a beautiful ending my friend. Thank you
My pleasure sir and hey, tis me that needs to do the thanking.... thanks Dan.. N
This perceptive write sees through the hardest of outer shells that abuse builds around unhappy females - such is life with many today - and a final stanza that could not be bettered brings tears to the eyes dear friend.
You are far too kind for my mere words.... but you know that I thank you, for those you left here... Neville
A special write that engages the reader.
Thank you Michael...much appreciated.. N
Beautiful emotion laden write Neville.
How very kind of you to say that my friend... bless you.. Hope you and yours have a comfortable weekend sir.... N
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