Anticipation.
Like pale starshine glued to lightening day,
barely covered
and moved by night's shift
is anticipation of up-coming love play.
Desire's flow unearths whisper-low places
tingle laden
and spiced with shiver
birthing engagingly the need for tasting.
As buds open so we when at passion's gate
suddenly bold
and way past waiting
for sated contentment feel bliss awaking.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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That's a nice feeling you so eloquently detailed here my very fine literary friend... a real delight that leaves this reader a tingling & salt laden... Neville
Hhmmm - - A load of thank yous dear Nev. You conjour the nicest results of a read my friend - can feel and taste them from here.
You having salt and vinegar crisps there Neville? I of course don't know what else you mean, cos Fido never gives me the chance. lol. Me next poem will be '101 laments of my lovelessness - or put Fido in the back yard for a month!' But still feed and water him.
My pleasure Fay... no orchidee I'm a good old fashioned plain salt kinda guy...
Old fashioned saline tastes sublime Nev - - tangy with maybe a bit of hot spice Make mine from the sea and I'll sprinkle it liberally until it tingles my anticipatory lips. - - - - hey are we talking of lip-smackin' mackerel here or going back to night's shift'y deeds ? ......x
shifty deeds sound so .......... as do your anticipatory lips.... x
Swoon! Fell off me chair! lol. A swoon's as far as I get, as Fido never lets me have anything 'exciting'. heehee.
THANKS FAY : FOR AN ELEGANT LOVE POEM ! It is presented in a gossamer vocabulary that precludes an "18" and excludes the Bark of Fido. It stirred our yearnings for each other and the shared intimacy of a Camper Van might just enable us to act out all three STANZAS !
1. Anticipation !
2. Paricipation ! !
3. Culmination ! ! !
We are both in our Prime (35 & 30) and nearly 8 months separation is too too much ! We both enjoyed the covert nuances in every word of your Love Poem ! Straight from your Heart to Ours !
Blessings & Love in the SPIRIT
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
You always get the most from each write published and this comment gives proof of your passion for poetry dear duo - -- I agree tis more than hard to be apart from a much loved one..... just a little while now though eh ? - - Hugs meanwhile - from Fay
An elegant burgeoning of love expressed in your own unique way. Another masterclass dear Fay.
Such an honour to be classed as a masterly writer dear Michael - - my bestest thanks.
Beautifully written Fay.
Bless you for this lovely comment dear friend.
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