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  Michael Edwards March 29th, 2019 02:13

  Nice one Sylvia - great use of language - enigmatic and intriguing.

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    sylviasearcherMarch 29th, 2019 02:46

    Enigmatic and intriguing are my two favourite personal constructs 😊

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  Goldfinch60 March 29th, 2019 02:23

  Super write Sylvia, so much within those few words, that is the beauty of 5-7-5s.

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    sylviasearcherMarch 29th, 2019 02:46

    Indeed, I like playing around in my head with 5 7 5 s instead of getting out of bed!

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    Goldfinch60March 29th, 2019 02:57

    I do that as well. On a previous Poetry Site I was on there was a lady on there who reckoned that she thought in 5-7-5.

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    sylviasearcherMarch 29th, 2019 03:04

    Oh no I’m not that clever, I sometimes talk in sing song rhyme to me children though because I think it might entertain them. It does not seem to have the desired effect!

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  Poetic Dan March 29th, 2019 03:37

  Lean on my pride, it's okay I'm a lion! Loved that line!
  I hope you see one day we can unclip them!
  Great stuff

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    sylviasearcherMarch 29th, 2019 04:13

    Thanks, I guess people see a lion because we work hard to look that way because the alternative is everyone seeing the truth.
    
    Having a bit of a woeful few days, sorry!

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    Poetic DanMarch 29th, 2019 05:57

    You take those days! I'll be sure to tag you out when it's my turn 😉

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    sylviasearcherMarch 29th, 2019 07:46

    Oh no, you won’t catch me!

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  Neville March 29th, 2019 05:09

  without a shred of a doubt.. enigmatic and intriguing ..

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    sylviasearcherMarch 29th, 2019 07:45

    Although they felt much less than that for sure