Scattered kindness crumbs
Devoured until beauty sings
Clipped wings don’t fly free
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sylviasearcher (
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Scattered kindness crumbs
Devoured until beauty sings
Clipped wings don’t fly free
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Nice one Sylvia - great use of language - enigmatic and intriguing.
Enigmatic and intriguing are my two favourite personal constructs 😊
Super write Sylvia, so much within those few words, that is the beauty of 5-7-5s.
Indeed, I like playing around in my head with 5 7 5 s instead of getting out of bed!
I do that as well. On a previous Poetry Site I was on there was a lady on there who reckoned that she thought in 5-7-5.
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Lean on my pride, it's okay I'm a lion! Loved that line!
I hope you see one day we can unclip them!
Great stuff
Thanks, I guess people see a lion because we work hard to look that way because the alternative is everyone seeing the truth.
Having a bit of a woeful few days, sorry!
You take those days! I'll be sure to tag you out when it's my turn 😉
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without a shred of a doubt.. enigmatic and intriguing ..
Although they felt much less than that for sure
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