I sat down with my stings
To play a tune
Nothing new
It'll do
Suddenly you
Are chirping
too
Little tune
Just for me
I looped It round
A few more
Times
&
So did
you
A Perfect
Tweak
Both synchronising
In harmony
Are little
Melody
On
Repeat
Then off you flew
How I wish
I was you
Free to
Move
I
Thank you
~~~~Break~~~~
For showing me
Tweeting
To me
All the little things
I've ever known
that I can be
Let go of fear
embrace the life
hear that bird inside you
And let the spirit fly
Are you listening
Let go of hate
Just rise above
Knowing in your spirit
Wings can't be crushed
Don't be afraid
It's not to late
Change only stops
If you hesitate
~~~~~Break~~~~~~
So go free
Your self
Listening
To natures
Call
Reset it
All
Living in the
Moments
Where you
Belong
Soul to
Soul
Knowing all
Will come
Nothings
Ever gone
Forever more
Living on
In each birds
Song
Within every
Strum
Blessings
Will come
Just play
Along
&
Find your
Song
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The other day I sat in my garden just pass time and to my delight a Robin came and sang along with me. As soon as I hit record, it flow off. I played it back and words started to enter my head, I have never done it like this and still need to figure out how to put it all together. Repetition is key right?
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Good write Dan. Yep, I know. A cat dashed off, once I started to sing. it probably thought I was trying to pick a fight - meoowwooo! ya hear me? lol.
Lol loud and clear
Thank you kindly
My dear friend
Very enjoyable.
In real life I had an encounter with a humming bird, just an arms length away, which is imprinted on my mind forever.
Yes I must say I can't stop thinking about it and I did have a buzz all day yesterday. I think it's still with me too, happy days natures way!
Always appreciated
Thank you
Erm, if ya dunno where ya are going, how will ya know when ya get there?! heehee. I know what you mean though. Take the No.7 bus. That may get ya there.
Night bus is it?
Could be! Some wag was having me on. I tried to trick him. I said 'Does the No.11 bus go to Mars?' He replied 'No, you want the No.15 bus for there' Doh!
Exceptionally well strummed he hummed and ah'ed... then wrote a poem bout a little bird.... wot a little cracker sir... not only a rather nice poem to kick the day off, but a very pleasant, simple tune that kind of goes round in my head in a really nice way..... Neville
You do spoil me with your words and I definitely need more practise but I definitely appreciate the encouragement as much as you may think.
Even more so knowing my jingle jangle is floating round you head.
Much peace and respect
my words are meant and true.. peace & all good things back at ya..
I kinda got an idea, like people gathering to this song...or a camp night together.
Now that is a wonderful compliment
I could never thank you enough
I'll be sure to not give up
What an artistic thing to achieve - playing along with a bird - great idea Dan. Love the positive vibes in your words.
Well I wish it was my idea but nature came up with it. Perfect timed with just a single chirp was all it had to do!
Thank you so much
Always appreciated
My absolute pleasure dear poet-friend.
This so original and sits so well with Fay's posting today - a really inspired write.
That had made my day thank you Good sir! And I'll head over that way now 😉
Have a wonderful day
It's the bird theme - must be the day for it.
Great piece of writing today m8. All about being in harmony with ones surroundings. And the simple pleasure one gets from making a nice noise on a musical instrument.
If i got one of my saxophone out and started honking away all the wildlife for miles would run for the hills though. With one exception.
It used to amaze me that when i was hammer drilling in a wall, any nearby spiders would approach the drill... i think the vibrations must be similar to the buzz of a fly caught in a web.. or maybe spiders are just frustrated building workers reincarnated with more legs?
Ha ha brilliant buddy! I guess some bring nature and others people, I do love the saxs.
Thank you for a massive laugh out loud!Â
Well needed my friend.Â
Happy drillingÂ
Ha ha brilliant buddy! I guess some bring nature and others people, I do love the saxs.
Thank you for a massive laugh out loud!
Well needed my friend.
Happy drilling 😉
Wonderful write highlighting a great occasion, nature’s sound are wonderful.
Thank you good sir!
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