Ballerina

Neville


Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍

Ballerina

Like a tiny ballerina

She skips across the floor

She pirouettes then reaches out

To rearrange a flower

Naked

Save the broken golden cross

She always wore

Then watching from the unmade bed

I realise her lover said

I love you

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  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 6th, 2019 04:24
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Fay Slimm.

    A love affair to remember when ending with such a tender confession - -- an evocative weekend read my friend.

    • Neville

      thank you so much Fay.... am so busy this weekend.. am struggling to respond to people here.... hopefully it will be quieter next week x

      • Fay Slimm.

        Busy can sometimes take our every moment Nev. - - - no probs with being unable to respond here mon ami - - wishing you rest when possible and hoping twill be a bit quieter for you tomorrow.... x Fay

      • Michael Edwards

        Great aah factor - I love it.

        • Neville

          Cheers Michael... N

        • orchidee

          Reminds me of 'Dance of the sugar plum fairy' by someone or another. I'm not 'into' classical stuff as an expert, as you see! lol. Some Chai-coughski bloke it is.

          • Neville

            Thank you for visiting these words....

            • orchidee

              Thanks N. Have a good weekend!

            • SerenWise

              Thought provoking piece, love the ending

              • Neville

                Thank you Seren... much appreciated... N

              • Goldfinch60

                Super loving write Neville.

                • Neville

                  Thank you sir... many thanks to ya... N

                • Poetic Dan

                  Start to end brilliant my friend!

                  • Neville

                    Thank you my friend.... Have a great weekend now.... N

                    • Poetic Dan

                      Hahaha absolutely!



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