Gems.
Jewelled with
rainbow translucence roll
rain-bead balls
slowly down outside windows.
Golden seed
pearls, globes of watery
glory slide
in uniformed lines, floorward.
Diamonds in
transit they shine and fire
sparkles from
each crystalline orb's inside.
Such gems if caught
by the scribe's borrowed
insight odes
to rain-drops might follow.
- Author: Fay Slimm. ( Offline)
- Published: April 9th, 2019 02:23
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 39
Comments8
Ah, I see you are jewelled with rainbows. A good place to be I guess. What a little gem here you have written. Nice to wake up to.
Grateful thanks for this lovely comment Kevin - - glad you enjoyed the read after waking.
Beautiful Fay, those jewels are wondrous.
Yes they are Goldy - each individual raindrop is a wonder of colour and shape.
As sure as God made little green apples, this must rate among the very top sparkly little gems here @ MPS..... N
You spoil me my friend - and I must admit to liking it - - so pleased you enjoyed looking at raindrops with me in this little verse.
enjoyed indeed & then some..
Delightful little raindrops. Oh where were they when i was literally soaked to the skin last night called out to attend a gas installation. HUGE mental shift created by you here as i appreciate the beauty of each of these little gems which overpowered me last night.
Revoking a soaking.
Ah - what a wonderful character you are D.A. - - firstly baptised in deluge and then turning about to appreciate the beauty of just one of those raindrops must be a lesson in true humility. A big thank you for sharing your soaking and how you revoked it........... so pleased this little read did that for you my friend.
Good write Fay.
Thank you very much for your visit and read dear Orchi.
Another gem Fay
Merci mon ami.............so glad you enjoyed my ode to the raindrop.
Sitting by the window, watching the rain fall. And then, following the path of a single drop gliding down the window pane - envisioning all that you so poetically framed
Takes this new reader to another place. Really enjoyable so well composed Thank you
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