Canvas

Neville


Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍

 

Canvas

 

I kiss your eyes

They leave warm oil taste

On my lips

.

Will your canvas

Ever dry

?

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 9th, 2019 04:03
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Answering -- Not if love is the oil your lips feel my friend - - a warm romantic read.

    • Neville

      Thank you Fay and very much appreciated you are, my friend...... Neville

    • dusk arising

      Keep her fresh by keeping your love vibrant.
      I am a fan of short pieces. The beauty of compact writing is it's invitation for each reader to expand the mental picture with their own colours and detail.

      Indeed today you provide a canvas upon which many pictures will be painted today.

      In a word .. 'enthralling'.

      • Neville

        You are far to generous DA, but of course I aint gonna argue with ya.. many very sincere thanks indeed.... Neville

        • dusk arising

          I dont know why this was triplicated on here, sorry about that. I deleted the other two copies.

          • Neville

            No worries DA, many thanks for the edit and of course again for your very kind review notes... Neville

          • orchidee

            Should I meet her too?!

            • Neville

              You can try your luck, of course, but dont blame me if......

            • SerenWise

              Interesting little write

              • Neville

                that will do nicely... ta.. Neville

              • Goldfinch60

                Such a wonderful canvas on which to produce such wonderful feelings.

                • Neville

                  You are most kind GF60 and I do so thank you for it... Neville

                • Michael Edwards

                  Short, simple and quite inspirational.Great work.

                  • Neville

                    Thank you Michael



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