Canvas
I kiss your eyes
They leave warm oil taste
On my lips
.
Will your canvas
Ever dry
?
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Author:
Neville (
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Canvas
I kiss your eyes
They leave warm oil taste
On my lips
.
Will your canvas
Ever dry
?
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Comments6
Answering -- Not if love is the oil your lips feel my friend - - a warm romantic read.
Thank you Fay and very much appreciated you are, my friend...... Neville
Keep her fresh by keeping your love vibrant.
I am a fan of short pieces. The beauty of compact writing is it's invitation for each reader to expand the mental picture with their own colours and detail.
Indeed today you provide a canvas upon which many pictures will be painted today.
In a word .. 'enthralling'.
You are far to generous DA, but of course I aint gonna argue with ya.. many very sincere thanks indeed.... Neville
I dont know why this was triplicated on here, sorry about that. I deleted the other two copies.
No worries DA, many thanks for the edit and of course again for your very kind review notes... Neville
Should I meet her too?!
You can try your luck, of course, but dont blame me if......
Interesting little write
that will do nicely... ta.. Neville
Such a wonderful canvas on which to produce such wonderful feelings.
You are most kind GF60 and I do so thank you for it... Neville
Short, simple and quite inspirational.Great work.
Thank you Michael
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