Shadow Envy

Neville

Shadow Envy

 

Oh’ how I envy your shadow

Forever by your side

 Yet never getting in the way

 

I wish our love

Could always be that simple

Until the very end of days

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 10th, 2019 03:16
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 42
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Shadows of love never impeach on the other to spoil its simplicity-- such a poignant appeal to these honest wishes in today's read Nev........

    • Neville

      Thank you Fay, I am always grateful when you grace my page with your thoughts and impressions.... Neville

      • Fay Slimm.

        I welcome the opportunity to visit read and comment your page dear Nev.

        • Neville

          I am both smiling and blushing here......

        • dusk arising

          Now thats clever and contains such wisdom.
          Short and sweet (thus powerful).
          Definitely one for my favourites.
          Thank you.

          • Neville

            I think it is I who should be thanking you.. so here goes, thank you, dusk arising.. N

            • dusk arising

              Seriously Neville i am thanking you for such a super read and one that REALLY chimed with me. Definitely this doesn't happen very often.

              • Neville

                Well bless ya DA and true say's I..... Neville

              • orchidee

                A fine write Neville. My singing gets in the way. lol.

                • Neville

                  thank you orchidee, appreciated this day you are.... N

                • Suresh

                  Let the shadows be intertwined forever.

                  Says it all

                  • Neville

                    when you put it like that, I cant help but smile.. thank you... N

                  • Michael Edwards

                    It has a gentle punch in its simplicity - great write Neville.

                    • Neville

                      I like that, thank you Michael.. N

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Matey those shadows intertwine into one.

                      • Neville

                        How wonderful is that... thanks GF60.... N

                      • SerenWise

                        Very poignant, nicely done

                        • Neville

                          No kidding, cheers, Neville



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